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Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-19 8:44]

Hi Maciej,

from this POV contrast between the white but well-balanced FG and the foggy -and a bit gloomy- BG is outstanding.As always excellent sharpness.It's snowing everywhere except here where the rain is pouring down...as usual lately.

TFS

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-18 13:44]

Hi Michael,

undoubtedly an original and well made interpretation of nature.The snow "whiter"?Try with selective colour correction; white selected; -15 black.And a tad of sharpness.WS attached.

TFS

Alessio

PS: i don't know why but tonight i'm having troubles with Trek sites.Hence, no WS.

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-18 13:24]

Buonasera Marco,

la Sacca degli Scardovari -come molte altre zone del Delta- è un luogo che, da tempo, mi riprometto di visitare.Non fosse altro che per i magnifici ambienti.La foto è indubbiamente buona, la luce smorza un pò, ma i dettagli sono comunque ben apprezzabili.E soprattutto la messa a fuoco è parecchio precisa.

Buona continuazione di serata.

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-18 13:18]

Buonasera Sergio,

il colore è forse un pò "pompato", ma non si chiama certo libellula scarlatta per caso.Detto questo richiama senza dubbio l'attenzione dell'osservatore.Ottimi i dettagli, quali l'abbondante venulazione delle ali e le zampe.

Buona continuazione di serata.

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-16 5:41]

Hi Deon,

definitely an image sticking out for its novelty.But after all this is nature and nature is a great artist.A nice collage full of colours and shapes, surely eye catching.In my opinion it lacks a bit of sharpness, but idea is more than appreciable.

TFS

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-16 5:26]

Bonsoir Philippe,

today i read of a tourist that, during a safari in savannah, wanting to be portrayed in a photo next to a rhino, she got closer to it a bit too much and, as a consequence, she has been horned.Definitely you've been wiser.Good details of scales especially those of the head.The sunset light is perfect for me and it creates a beautiful warm -and golden- tone.I consider it a strong point of this image.

TFS

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-16 2:10]

Hi Ori,

simplicity in this image is synonym with forcefulness.Straightforward, no-frills, merely well made.Subject stands out well from the BG and it's very sharp.In addition composition is the best possible, in my opinion.

TFS

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-16 1:50] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hi Michael,

in many ways the photo is good, sharpness, focus, composition, POV.In my opinion the tone, intended as colours brightness, isn't the best possible.Too bright, insect stands out from BG but not as it could.To better explain you my idea i made a WS, hoping you don't mind.

TFS

Alessio

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Silvio2006 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6690 W: 90 N: 16812] (102073)

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Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-15 12:51]

Buonasera Silvio,

le farfalle, salvo rari casi, non so bene valutarle, questo è quindi un diversivo ben accetto da parte mia.I colori sono veramente belli -il rosso del becco e soprattutto quello intorno all'occhio catturano l'attenzione immediatamente- e la nitidezza è molto buona.Da questo POV giusto un ritratto lo si può definire.

Buona continuazione di serata.

Alessio

Ilducabianco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 18 N: 79] (307) [2013-01-15 12:37]

Hi Ana,

if going in the garden i came across these birds roosting on a tree waiting for me, probably i would feel like Tippi Hedren in Hitchcock's "The birds".They are a bit sinister.Despite the whitish sky this image is anyway pleasant.Seven cuckoos stand out well from the BG and create a beautiful composition.Sharpness is remarkable.

TFS

Alessio