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drchoneydew Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 38 N: 475] (3501) [2012-04-11 2:45]

WOW love this and the story on how you attained it! spectacular! Hope to see more of your work in the future!!

trevorbayliss Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 0] (0) [2008-10-24 10:48] [+]

Hello Jim
I saw your forum post and then took a look at the pic which is so much easier to crit with the benefit of a larger size...Im not to sure what the pixel dimensions are on the larger pic though.
So to the pic...It is a good scene familiar with many...I watched a flock last weekend from my local supermarket car park in the UK.
I personally think that your focus is off on this capture..If you look a bit harder your focus is on the clouds which are sharp and true whilst all else is a little hazy...Dont get me wrong...Im not an oversharpening fan but I do think good focus is everything...The kit lense that you use may well be letting your skills down as it is a very good paper weight and not a very good optical tool.
A good capture none the less and Tfs...
Given points tend to breed recieved points here on TN regardless of technical difficulty or aesthetics.
All the Best
Trev

gerdakettner (48) [2008-08-12 12:52] [+]

Hi Jim
abs. gorgeous, love the warmth of the different shades of green and the light is beautiful the reflections on the river are nicely captured,

TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926) [2005-10-13 12:30] [+]

They are not fresh but old Puffballs ;-)