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shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2009-02-08 5:22]

absolutely fantastic shot, composition, dof and crisp sharpness.
tfs
shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2009-02-08 5:21]

a lovely bird but the detail of the bird is a little soft. you might want to try a larger dof, a faster shutter speed and a flash.

tfs
shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-08-08 17:44]

Hi Annick,

Beautiful shot with good detail and sharpness. I especially like the contrast of the bird's color against the winter background.

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-08-08 6:51] [comment]

hi ozgur,
Beautifuly composed and good colors.

tfs,
Shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-05-03 3:32]

Hi Peter,

I love your shot and the details that you've captured. Well done.!

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-01-07 21:55]

Gethin,

Welcome n I hope you're enjoying your new camera.

Nice colors on the butterfly, however it's soft. It would have been an excellent shot if one could see the details of the butterfly clearly. You could have cropped the photo too. Next time, try adjusting your shutter speed.

TFS
Shirley

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pith (143)

Great

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-01-07 21:34] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Pith,

Excellent definition of the butterfly. It would have been a better shot if you had a shorter DOF so that your background is a little less noisy. Other alternative is to crop the picture to bring focus on the butterfly n the leaf it sits on.

TFS
Shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-01-06 18:52] [+]

Hi Rakesh,

Nice shot.

You would have gotten better detail with a higher f-stop, which would have given you a less busy background to bring focus to your subject.

TFS
Shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-01-06 18:43]

Hi Jurica,

The shot would have been better if the background on the left wasn't busy. As there isn't enough information, I am guessing that a flash wasn't used. You would have gotten a better result I think with flash.

TFS
Shirley

shirl6900 Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 24] (316) [2008-01-06 18:39] [+]

Hi Alan,

Nice shot. However, the wing tips on the forefront and bottom righthand corner are blurred. I'm guessing it is caused by the flash.

TFS
Shirley