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ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-25 16:47]

Marvellous. You managed to get a good shot even with f/5,6 - not easy at all. Great colors and detail, the only "error" is the grass on the right.

Very beautyful.
Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-25 16:45]

You glued it in place? :D
Two good shots, maybe the one where the bird is younger is a bit short of DOF, and nice idea.

Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-25 16:29] [+]

Cavoli, che primo piano! Grande messa a fuoco ed ottimi colori, bellissimi dettagli, un filo rumorosa.
Complimenti.
Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-25 16:27]

Che bella.... un filino rumorosa, ma veramente molto bella - come al solito, mi vien da dire :)

Ciao, complimenti
Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 11:25]

Un close up particolare e piacevole. Peccato per il rametto sulla destra.

Bravo
Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 11:22] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Troppo rumore - probabilmente a causa di una eccessiva maschea di contrasto applicata. Ben difficilmente ad 80 ISO l'immagine appare cosė rumorosa - a meno che non si tratti di un crop decisamente estremo!

Ho provato a recuperarla un po' - dagli un'occhio ;)

Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 8:48]

Bellissimo documento, complimenti! Discreta anche la pdc e la definizione, nonostante tutto!

Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 8:45]

Bellissima definizione e colori, complimenti!

Samuele

ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 8:20]

Bella foto, con ottimi dettagli. Complimenti, come sempre ;)

Samuele

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ObySamKenoby Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 9 N: 22] (165) [2007-06-23 8:14] - [workshop] [compare]

Don't know.... This is a good idea poorly implemented.
The light is beauty, sky is awesome, the shadows are confusing.
I try to explain myself better: there are too many things in the lowest part of the frame, every one going in a different direction, so your eye isn't guided inside the frame and remains "blocked"... it seems like in the lowest part is present only a mess!
I tried a workshop to explain better - well, it's more an interpretation of this image than a workshop, but it should give you the idea.

Try it again ;)
Samuele