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dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-04 21:01]

For this ling of pictre which is or should enhance the sky, it is important that the sky remains in focus. But after all it is a nice texture with warm colors.

It is too bad you did not have a chance to sue a flash to lighten the back of the leaves in the foreground. But may be you did not have a flash when you took that picture

Egypt
Title: Reef life
Reef life (17)
Pedda Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 41 W: 1 N: 247] (1287)

Good

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-04 20:59]

Nice composition, with a contrast between cold and warm colors.
It's a pity you added an unecessary logo in the bottom left which is so imposing that it spoils the whole picture.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-04 20:57]

This is a relly nice picture. You manage to have a soft and out of focus background whihc is not distrating our attention. The bird is sharp and the lighting conditions are good.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-04 20:49]

It is a great shot. But I agree with sAner, it is a little bit overexposed.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:23]

Very nice picture. Well composed and with nice lighting balance.
What I like also in this picture is that you managed to take the bird with a background soft and not distracting.
Well done.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:20]

Nice posture and nice soft background.
The shadows on the bird ar reinforcing the texture of the feathers.
Well done.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:15]

Interest shot. I did it myself (you can see it in my photo gallery), but had to spray myself water on the web to get these drops.
It's a pity the lower left part of the picture is out of focus. But this is not devaluing the appeal of that picture anyway.

I like the background very soft and not distracting at all.

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:13]

Great picture. generally underwater pictures come out very greenish. But when using a powerful flash to give some warm colors, you managed to get this right balance between cold and warm colors and everything is in focus and sharp.
Well done. I really like it

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:10]

Great picture. But may be it merits a slight cropping on the top to remove the distracting background made of of these dead trees on the floor.

France
Title: Stoic
Stoic (38) *
Midi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 146 W: 24 N: 183] (2418)

Great

dormoy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 2 N: 41] (218) [2005-02-02 21:08] [+]

Very sharp picture and the lighting conditions are enhancing the bird.
May be the background is a little bit distracting, but this is not too much of a problem