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klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-08 12:32]

Salut Laurent,
un possibilité excellente pour faire visible toutes les détails intéressants de ce papillon: les cheveux, l'oeil, la langue. Bien venu!
Regards,
Gabi

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-08 12:10]

Hi Gerhardt,
this wonderfully captures the dynamic of flight, inspite of the close crop, which usually tends to make this difficult. The composition on the diagonal, the pose and direction of flight and the slightly striped BG under and beside of the bird all emphasize the uplift. Excellent post!
Gabi

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:48]

Salut Laurent,
c'est mignon, ce jeune oiseau, justement sorti de son nid. Très belle avec le fond zébré, est le bec jaune intensif. Et le plumard - on peut voir tous les seules plumes! Fantastique!
Gabi

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:32]

The blue on blue. Wonderful clean portrait, you could count the feathers.

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:29]

Beauty spread out. Effective diagonal compo!

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:28]

Very dramatic pose!

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:26]

Great collage of the egrets. Which software do you use? If it is possible with whatver you use, you could draw 1 square, fill it white, copy it 4 times and position each of them on each side, overlapping, in the topmost layer to give a regular passepartout/frame.

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:22]

This is great, the implied movement gives it heaps of impact. The precarious position is emmphasized by the cross-hatch of the palm fronds and this complicated patterns somehow repeats in the head and bottom feathers that go every which way.

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:18]

Great portrait, wonderful brownish orange tones in the iris that nicely repeat in the BG!

klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2007-09-06 14:16]

Fascinating woody/velvety textures, love the complementary colour contrast reddish/coppery tones of the seed pot with green BG!