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ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-05 22:47]

Excellent shot!!

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 15:55]

Love the subject! BG is nicely done,except for the light spot on the bottom and on the top. Looks like the red might be a tad oversaturated as you have lost the feather detail. A larger DOf would have been nice so we could see the entire bird.

Makes a good picture though.

TFS
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 15:52]

Hi Diana,

Warm welcome to TN! I like your first post. The composition is diagonal which is very pleasing, the BG is totally complimentary as it is even and noiseless. At a DOF of 7.1, you should have had more detail on the flower. Maybe you used noise removal software and lost some of the detail on the flower?

Welcome to the group and may you benefit much from it.

TFS!
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 14:11] [+]

Hi Gloria,

this is a very interesting shot. I would have cropped differently as the entire tree is distracting, but just the part under the bird and some of the water on the right would have made a great pic and would have allowed more detail of the bird to show through. The green foliage on the right bottom takes away from the image as it is distracting.

Good timing on the shot, like the bird's posture.

TFS!
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 13:15]

Excellent timing!

TFS
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 13:14]

Beauty! Like the detail on the bird inspite of the fact that it is on snow.

TFS!
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 13:14]

What a little beauty!!

I think the snow is causing the bird to be underexposed a little bit. You have lost the detail on the wings as OEing any further will cause the snow to become blinding.

I might post a workshop.

TFS
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 13:12]

You have captured the roller well.
A few technical points on the photograph:
I would have selected a tighter crop so more of the bird is seen.
Photo seems to be underexposed a little which makes the details of the bird difficult to see.

TFS!
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 9:18]

Beauty!! Love the shot, feather detail awesome, BG well done.
TFS!!
Liezel

ldsouza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 101 W: 25 N: 218] (1369) [2008-01-04 9:15]

Awesome shot!! Love the wing blur and the tongue sticking out. Nice tight focus on the eye and body.
TFS
Liezel