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wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-11-29 16:31]

Artur,
Looks like a beautiful place. I like the image, gives a real sense of solitude and quiet. The mountains are beautiful and I like the late-night Arctic light in the scene. Regarding the image: you cold probably crop away a bit of the foreground and the sky creating a more panoramic appearance. I think the way the tents are reminiscent of the mountains in th background is a nice feature of the photo and a little cropping would emphasize the relationship.

Best,
Dave Shaw

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-11-27 16:54]

This is a really nice vista and it looks like quite a place. A couple of things: this seems like harsh mid-day light, have you thought about trying it out in black and white? A little more emphasis on the foreground might have been nice, getting down low and using a rock, or better yet a marmot to provide some detail and something for the viewer to focus on in the foreground. Regardless I really like the shot and its a place I'd enjoy visiting.

Best,
Dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-19 20:38]

Wonderful sky! I like your composition with the landscape low in the frame. It allows the sky to be the subject. The only thing that is very slightly distracting is the lights on the left. Those could be easily cropped out.

Nice shot,
Dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-19 20:30]

Really nice image Evelynn. I like the composition and the trail winding away to somewhere in the distance. Reminds me a lot of autumn in Alaska. Your comment is right, the exposure is a touch off. I think these bright sun conditions are always so tricky to shoot in, but your wonderful composition makes up for it.

Best,
Dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-19 20:25]

Really nice mantis image. And your title is quite apt, they are rather alien like. I always think that no matter how strange or creative a science fiction writer is, it can never compete with how fantastic and bizarre that natural world is. I like your framing, and the dark background. Unique and detailed. Good focal point.

Best,
Dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-19 20:22]

Very nice, I like the cloud-like appearance of the waves with the long exposure. Good composition, depth of field and detail. A split neutral density filter may have helped prevent the sky from being so bright, but it is a minor detail in a really lovely image.

-dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-18 21:04]

Walter,
Another exceptional hummingbird shot, and what a great atypical pose. I love your ability to freeze the action. The flash is not too severe and really works well. Great work.

-dave

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wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-18 21:02]

Very nice dramatic macro. I like the angled composition. Good depth of field with all the eyes and action in focus. Unlucky moth...

Best,
Dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-18 20:38]

Wow what great timing! I'm surprised more people have not commented on this image. I really enjoyed wandering around chinstrap colonies when I was in Antarctica a couple years back. Quite a photogenic place. Nice image, and very entertaining.

-dave

wildimagination Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 55 W: 0 N: 61] (435) [2006-10-17 19:24] [+]

Walter,
Really an exquisite hummingbird shot. Very sharp and detailed, the flash is not overwhelming. Was this really just 1/250second? The wings are almost completely frozen. I like the flowers dropping down from above and the hint of greenery. You did lose abit of the iridescence in the gorget with the flash, but I can't think of anyway that could be remedied without losing some other aspect of the shot. Very, very nice.

Best,
Dave