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Moldova
Title: Snowflake
Snowflake (10)
deud Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 11 N: 534] (2540)

 

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-10-06 7:57]

Hello Sochirca, this is a good image. I love the idea here. I think you could improve it a little by taking the flake off the central position and place it say in the top left - this would lead to a more balanced composition. Perhaps an adjust ment of levels also. Overall it's a great idea for an image. I quite like the frame too! Well done.

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-09-05 14:46] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hello Servane,

This is a very strong image. The rhino appears rather tragic here. I love the use use of B&W too. The legs in the BG catch the eye a little and I think without them the image could be stronger as the animal would be more isolated. I've done a very quick workshop to show you. I hope you like it and I hope you don't mind. Great shot!

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-08-05 15:33] - [workshop] [compare]

Hello Matthew, I read the haze forum and looked at your image. I did a WS to give one option, there are others too...of course one way to avoid some of the haze is not to take shots when the light is harsh and flat! :-)

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-18 13:14]

Hi Manyee, it's good to see you again.

They do look a little rough around the edges at this age! Nice shot. Good focus and details - it's eye has the cunning of an adult. Well done.

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-18 13:12]

Hello Joseph, exquisite lighting on this one. I love the capture of the bird singing. Nice amount of space around it. Fantastic!

Canada
Title: Tree Swallow
Tree Swallow (32)
jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1538 W: 5 N: 2240] (12636)

 

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-18 13:09]

Hello Joseph, it's good to see you and it's good that you're still taking such wonderful bird shots. This is no exception. What can I say? It's lovely.

South Africa
Title: Junior
Junior (92) *
loot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5524 W: 722 N: 4163] (11276)

 

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-18 13:07]

Hi Loot, this is about the only time in their lives that they look nice/cite (my personal opinion of course). I had a grown up one peck me a few weeks back, it left quite a bruise! It's a good composition and the lighting is very warm, good focus on the catchlit eye too. Very nice.

Spain
Title: Sunbathing
Sunbathing (90) *
jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1659 W: 95 N: 2273] (8415)

 

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-17 16:21]

Hello Jose, good shot. It's a nice composition with the beetle on the flower. His Antennae are great. Well done.

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-17 16:06] [+]

Hello Alenka, welcome to TN. Nice first post and it's good that you appear to be trying to do something different. Perhaps the light is a bit harsh here - the white areas have lost detail. I like hte fly inside!

Well done.

PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769) [2007-07-17 16:04]

Hello Jose, Lovley composition and subject - the colours are great too. The exposure is good, the only negative is that it is a little soft in focus. Well done.