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Palm Tree


Palm Tree
Photo Information
Copyright: Hussein Kefel (Hussein_Kefel) (128)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-18
Categories: Trees
Camera: Sony DSC-V1
Exposure: f/8, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-08-14 0:31
Viewed: 4241
Points: 6
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Picture by: Hussein Kefel
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To Evelynn: Hey! it's perfectHussein_Kefel 1 08-16 13:28
To Evelynn: Thanks!Hussein_Kefel 1 08-14 17:01
To robindb: Thank youHussein_Kefel 1 08-14 04:08
To Mikolaj: Thanks!Hussein_Kefel 1 08-14 04:01
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Hello Hussein! Nice lonely palm. Very nice beach. Beautiful landscape. Good colors. Well done!

Hi Hussein,

A nice clean image of this scene with nice colour and DoF. Your horizon, (the line between sea and sky) is also level and roughly on a third which is good.
I think there are a number of possibilities here for different shots as well. You could perhaps walk around and try different compositions by putting the base of the tree more to the left and then having something, a rock or so, on the right to balance it.

Have fun

Robin

Hello Hussein,

Welcome to TrekNature. This is a nice sharp, well exposed image. I do think the composition is a bit static though. The palm tree, with that lovely curve would be better placed off-center. I would crop to the right of the tree, just above those little clouds and also a bit off the bottom. You have not authorized workshops where I could show you what I mean. Workshops are great learning tools for the presenter as well as for the recipient.

TFS
Evelynn ; )

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