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Sun Burn - (II) to Zahoor Ahmed

Sun Burn - (II) to Zahoor Ahmed
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Copyright: Kirti M Rawat (kmr13777) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 157 W: 67 N: 187] (703)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-15
Categories: Sky
Camera: sony cybershot DSC w1
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/40 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): gondox's favorites - sunsets, Photos by an amateur photographer [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-06 13:49
Viewed: 4047
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello Everyone,
This one is to Zahoor Ahmed from Pakistan. I bumped into him just a few days ago in the TN gallery. He has some really wonderful work on his profile. A challenge that he faces with every photo he posts is his inability to read or write in a language which is understood by the masses here. Which means he usually avoids writing notes or even if he does the responses that he gets are again in languages he doesn't understand.
I request all who have the ability to write in Hindi or Urdu and like or dislike his work to critique his work in either of the languages. It will help him go through the same learning experience that we all go through and keep him motivated. I am sure TN would have been no fun to any of us if no body critiqued our work. I think if he has both the skill and the will... then let's give it to him.

About the photo.
Another perspective of a sun set in Dharamsala. The white spots are lights from a village on the slopes of a hill.

PP - Cropped and used NeatImage to reduce noise.

Thanks for stopping by.

maurydv, JoshLewis, smitha, ramthakur, goldyrs, gannu, jusninasirun, gracious has marked this note useful
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Immagine suggestiva con il bellissimo orizzonte rosso e il movimento delle nuvole scure, molto buona la composizione con il taglio basso orizzontale. Grazie e complimenti. Ciao maurizio

Very beuaitful sky! The gray and orange make a great comination! Cheers Josh Lewis.

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  • smitha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 73 N: 1165] (4409)
  • [2008-04-06 19:13]

Hello Kirti,
It's a fabulous shot! The sky looks so beautiful with the golden hue n the horizon and the dark and light clouds in the foreground. The silhouetted
trees also looks nice. Liked the framing too.
Thanks for the share,
It's a beautiful dedication and I am sure Zahoor is going to love this.

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  • waylim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 296 W: 8 N: 489] (1765)
  • [2008-04-06 23:24]

Beautiful sunset image with such nice tone. Love the hill and tree silhoutte and the sparkel of lights in the dark. The dark and deep red horizon again the golden sky creat such a harmony of colors and light. The blue tone seem to be missing, but it turned out nice. Peachful and relaxing atmosphere. Just lovely.

A truly artistic composition, Kirti.
The layers of colours in the sky are phenomenally beautiful.
The one-third dark earth within the frame with only the silhouettes of the trees in view is a significant component of this fine image.
Take care.

Shaayad main zindagi ki seher le ke aa gaya,
qaatil ko aaj apne he ghar le ke aa gaya..
I'm getting worried Kurtz..did I introduce someone who will cannibalise me?Kidding...bro,Love this shot..perfectly warm, perfectly simple..
Very well done!

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 988 W: 4 N: 3277] (14761)
  • [2008-04-07 10:09]

Hello Kirti, Wonderful frame and such a superb landscape scenario. Nice colors and great view. Ganesh

Hi Kirti!

It's a sunset pic of my taste. If you look at my bit earlier shots you will see why I like this one, no need to express in words! The only thing I say is I would have done it the same way. TFS!

Best regards,

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2008-04-07 20:55]

Beautiful light, well composed and very nice colors! Well done Kirti! Thanks!


Hello Kirti. Very well captured sunset with stunning cloud formation. I like the colorful horizon above the silhouette foreground. Regards. Jusni

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6573 W: 89 N: 15657] (65479)
  • [2008-04-08 2:35]

Hi Kirti,not a usual sunrise,very impressive work,i like a lot the lights and the colours,great way to show,my best compliments,Luciano

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2008-04-08 6:13]

Hi Kirti,
this sunset scene looks wonderful.
The colors and the scenery look just great.
I like the use of space and the format you used.

Hello Kirti,
This is good panorama view of a nice sunset well composed in depth!
you had a good fg silhouette makes the depth too!
the beautiful colouration makes a good part of the sky also covered a small part of burnt in white!
many thanks for the sharing
best regards

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1772 W: 36 N: 5597] (18598)
  • [2008-04-08 21:45]

Hi Kirti,
Wonderful shot with stunning colours and cloud formation on the sky. The silhouetted landscape looks fine and I like the dots of lights flickering through the dark place. Very nice dedication to our friend from neighbouring land and a just appeal - true to the spirit. Excellent POV and very nicely composed. Kudos.

Hi Kirti, fascinating sunset with superb sky, fantastic colors and splendid light, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 26 N: 3879] (13882)
  • [2008-04-11 3:10]

Hi Kirti,
very nicely compsoed with some wonderful effects of the cloud and light. I like the panoramic crop too. Well done and have a great weekend,

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  • jalvex (67)
  • [2008-04-11 3:26]

Hi Kirti. This one is a beautiful sunset. I love the colors and the clouds contrast.
Very well composed. That spots increase the all value.
Good crop, good frame.

Great shot. The panaromic composition and colours look great.

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