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What are you looking at?


What are you looking at?
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Copyright: Dan leung (kenny10pin) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 25] (100)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-09
Categories: Birds
Camera: Sony DSC-F828, Memory stick, Hama circular polarizer
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-08-09 4:07
Viewed: 4807
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this in Tsurumai park today and before I did, it did a pigeon poop on my hand, yuck!!!

There are so many pigeons in Tsurumai park, that when a visitor comes along the pond, they come flying over expecting you too feed them, this one was above me and wasnt afraid of me or my camera,, it just strolled back and forth this stone bridge railing and then went because I didnt have any food

I hope you like it

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Nice dove Daniel
I like the way he is looking into the camera. good composed, good colours, but I think you can make it some better with paint shop pro.
very good job

Dan
Thisis the ubiquitous flying rat, a pest everywhere. The general composition is fine. Hoever, 3 things to maybe help, Use fill flash to open up the shadows, try to get the bill in profile, not head-on, the sharp bill always looks "strange" and silightly rotate the wa;; CW to get the perch levels.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 893 W: 0 N: 507] (1853)
  • [2004-08-09 8:05]

A alert pigeon Daniel, she look in the camera, lovely sharp and clear!

Fun posing you caught of this pigeon, Dan - good sharpness in the bird and the textured wall it is sitting on, and good DOF. A bit dark on the breast, maybe working on the contrast towards some more brightness would be worth a try. Well done!

Nice picture with nice color and good sharpness
But it is to dark in the breast.
You can do alot to fix it. Shadows in a digital image
have alot of details.
I post a WS to show.

Extra tres belle approche avec un sujet trés bien détaillé.
Une belle image Daniel bravo

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