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Copyright: Jakub Cejpek (jakubcejpek) (11)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-01-16
Categories: Mammals
Camera: Olympus C-8080 WZ
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-17 9:45
Viewed: 3812
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first photo on treknature.com, thanks for comment in aditional...
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Welcome to TN Jakub,
your 1st post of this head of what you say is a Mouflon Sheep is a little tight on the framing loosing the top of the head and right ear. being slightly further away would of allowed you to choose where to crop the image.
Now I know this is in a domestic /Zoo /farm situation from the Ear Tag, and the image you post does not conform to the images I have found on the web, so I am not sure you have a right identification, I think it is more likely to be a domestic Goat of some sort which being domestic if this was so would need to move to TrekLens where non wild animals are allowed.havea look at this image of a Ram Moufon and see what you think, also you could use the information to update your note with information about it and the details of where and how you took the shot and prepared it to show here, have a look at some of the better posted images here to see the sort of thing that goes down well.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2005-01-17 15:39]

Welcome here to TN Jacub. The eye contact in this image is excellent and so is the DOF. The crop is a bit tight to my liking but the quality of the image is very good.

Very well done and thanks for posting. I hope to see lots more of your work here on TN

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2005-01-18 22:20]

A good first performance, Jakub.
I am suprised to see that thing on its ear.
Good point of view and DoF.
I wish you the most cordial welcome on TN.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing.

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