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Bouquet d'arbres en Lozère


Bouquet d'arbres en Lozère
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Copyright: Raymond Dejong (Bru) (67)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-08-20
Categories: Bushveld
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-11 16:43
Viewed: 3810
Points: 1
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Bouquet de hètres en Lozère
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I like some features of this photo and think that if there were more differentiation between the values it would have more interest. It is heavy on mid tones. I suspect that it was the sky that most attracted your attention, but I took the liberty of cropping it in a workshop.. I wanted to give the foreground a little more dominance in proportion to the sky and make the trees more a focal point at the one third mark in both directions. I also like the way the clouds parallel the top of the trees which adds to the interest in the tree area. Your compositin is fine too. Just applying a little "Levels" or "Contrast" would give more power to composition. Thanks for sharing. "Oops, I've reached my limit...I'll post the workshop tomorrow. : )

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