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Copyright: EDITH SEGUIN (nainnain) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 83 N: 1282] (6259)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-30
Categories: Flowers
Camera: konica mimolta dimage z6, 52 mm Polarizer
Exposure: f/8, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-05-22 5:58
Viewed: 3314
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
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To Evelynn: remerciementsnainnain 1 05-22 16:29
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bonjour edith
la aussi le cadre est un peu trop coloré,un cadre plus simple aurais suffit a rehausser ce beau paysage.les fleurs au premier plan donne un plus a ce cliché.
laurent

Hello Edith,

I agree with Laurent about the frame. It takes away from your image rather than focusing the viewer on your pretty image.
The image needs to be rotated a bit and there appears to be some barrel distortion which I haven't a clue how to overcome in post processing. I did a quick workshop to try to even out the saturation, straighten and reframe. See what you think. These decisions are very personal and it is only option. Thanks for sharing

Evelynn : )

Hello Edith,
Beautiful background for this pleasant flowers!
Good colours and details, and I like the composition...
Greetings,
Pablo -

well shot of an landscape.

TFS

Wonderful image, Edith, great colors and POV. I'd just watch the horizon, the sea should be flat!

Merci,

Alli

Bonjour Edith,
Nice seascape, nice flowers. Some OE spots are detected on the flowers.

BL

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