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Copyright: EDITH SEGUIN (nainnain) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 83 N: 1282] (6259)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-07
Categories: Birds
Camera: konica mimolta dimage z6, 52mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-01-10 12:30
Viewed: 3533
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
hello has all once again not proud of my diffusion!!! but nothing drinkable. Sunday at the time of a walk, I saw this swan on an arm of the SEINE, I thus stopped, but it was very far, I thus made my better!!! I present it to you despite everything, considering that changes a little small birds which come to nourir themselves on the edge of the window. once again, I did not owe yet utiliserle good adjustment!!! highly the retirement that I take time to improve me ............... has work there!!!! go are frank, thank you.

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Hello Edith,
Your point of view in taking this picture is very good, but there is some noise in the BG, if I can trust my aging eyes. The frame is remarkable and the subject seen through the screen of denuded foliage looks wonderful.
Thanks for sending me an email the content of which I could only guess at, having no French at all; it was something pleasant, I am sure.
Warm regards,
Ram

Hola Edith.
Magnífica captura. Los colores son extraños, pero encantadores.
Saludos, JL.

bonjour edith
aie aie aie,tu nous a habitué a mieux.
laurent
bon pour le cirage alors (¨)

coucou didith
je vais être franche oui,
ca manque de netteté,
ce n'est pas dans tes habitudes...
ahhh mais je sais pourquoi... tu as voulu m'accompagner '(pour ma photo avec le vilain cadre) hihihi
gros bisous ma didith

bonjour edith
bien moi je te met les deux point je te dit pourquoi

1 tu prend des risques en la mettant et j'aime ca
2 tu cherche a diversifié pour ne pas toujours nourire la même idée et ca aussi j'aime bien
maintenant pour ta photo c'est vraie quelle est pas top mais comme tu la dit le cygne était loing et tu a surément du faire un gros crop ce qui diminue la qualité de ta photo dout le manque de netteté
en tout état de cause bravo pour avoir essayé autre chose et osez la mettre

eric

Bonjour Edith!
C'est vrai que ce n'est pas ta plus belle réussite... On dirait que la mise au point s'est faite sur les branches devant le cygne, laissant celui-ci dans sa troublitude! Une belle photo de branches donc, parfaitement nettes, elles!
Amitiés, et vivement ton prochain post ;-)
Daniel

Hello Edith,
This one is a bit out of focus and overexposed. It is very difficult to take a photo of far away subject. Anyway, you have fun in taking photo and that is all matter.
JC

  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2007-01-11 11:24]

Hello Edith,
Lovely capture.It's a little noisy and some white feathers are overexposed but i liked POV and visual impact.Have a great day!
TFS...:-)

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  • jojo Gold Star Critiquer [C: 168 W: 0 N: 8] (176)
  • [2007-01-11 11:25]

Bonjour Edith
Je vais pas dire la même chose "pas top ta photo"
mais pas grave on ne peut pas tout réussir
bravo
bizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

jojo

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer [C: 191 W: 0 N: 10] (173)
  • [2007-01-12 11:05]

merhaba EDITH;
güzel bir çalışma , tebrikler selamlar

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  • marty Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-01-18 20:48]
  • [+]

sharp *
comp *
Exp *
subject *****
Dof/bg **
dfficulty ***
POV *

very pretty, I like the work you did on it , and the pov with the grasses as she swims by.. TFS
donna:o)


Thanks for your comments on my photo "wingless duck" :o)

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