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Wild Sweet Pea


Wild Sweet Pea
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Copyright: Ori Fragman Sapir (fragman) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3030 W: 11 N: 2351] (43776)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-17
Categories: Flowers
Exposure: f/4, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-25 1:37
Viewed: 4167
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the wild sweet pea (Lathyrus odoratus). Found in clayish area in central Sicily last week.
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Hi, Ori!
Great shot but I don't like the exposure, good POV.
Cheers

Hi Ori,
What a lovely field of wild sweer pea. Your photo could use some more contrast so that the color of the flower sticks out. You might also consider a crop to loose the washed out sky.
Regards,
Niek

  • Great 
  • jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1659 W: 95 N: 2273] (8415)
  • [2006-04-25 10:57]

Hi Ori,
Though I understand the previous comment, this landscape is so close to mine that I like it even with this light. I have got some filters to try to enhance the light in such situation, but I have to experience yet.
I would consider to send a WS with a close-up of this flower to see it well.
Josť M.

  • Good 
  • Aramok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 101 N: 1501] (5166)
  • [2006-04-25 13:21]

I really like what Niek has done with your picture - it shows it wonderfully.

I can't help thinking that if you had taken the picture from a much lower viewpoint, it would have included more of the flowers and could have included a much closer picture of one of them as well. With the land going away up hill, you would still have had the flowers, the rocks adn the sky, but you would have shown just that little bit more of the flowers.

Emma

What a great shot Ori.
Looks like a subreal landscape and the details are superb.
Good composition and POV.
TFS!!!!
Regards
JC

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