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Sleepy Duck


Sleepy Duck
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Copyright: Pieter van der Horst (sAner) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1455 W: 74 N: 1426] (4750)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-11
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Sigma AF 100-300/f4.0 EX APO, B+W 82mm UV-HAZE
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-25 14:33
Viewed: 6027
Points: 80
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sleepy

1. Drowsy; inclined to, or overcome by, sleep. "She waked her sleepy crew." (Dryden)

2. Tending to induce sleep; soporiferous; somniferous; as, a sleepy drink or potion.

3. Dull; lazy; heavy; sluggish. "'Tis not sleepy business; But must be looked to speedily and strongly." (Shak)

4. Characterised by an absence of watchfulness; as, sleepy security.

(Science: zoology) Sleepy duck, the ruddy duck.

Origin: AS. Slpig. See Sleep.

Duck

1. (Science: zoology) Any bird of the subfamily Anatinae, family Anatidae.

The genera and species are numerous. They are divided into river ducks and sea ducks. Among the former are the common domestic duck (Anas boschas); the wood duck (Aix sponsa); the beautiful mandarin duck of China (Dendronessa galeriliculata); the Muscovy duck, originally of South America (Cairina moschata). Among the sea ducks are the eider, canvasback, scoter, etc.

Bombay duck, a small aquatic mammal of Australia, having webbed feet and a bill resembling that of a duck (Ornithorhynchus anatinus). It belongs the subclass Monotremata and is remarkable for laying eggs like a bird or reptile; called also duckbill, platypus, mallangong, mullingong, tambreet, and water mole.

2. A sudden inclination of the bead or dropping of the person, resembling the motion of a duck in water. "Here be, without duck or nod, Other trippings to be trod." (Milton)

Origin: OE. Duke, doke.

Different definitions from:
http://www.biology-online.org/dictionary/
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This is the same duck as I posted HERE, only seconds later.

This beautiful drake was taking a nap in the grass on the waterbank, near "Het Streekbos". The sun was already setting and that's why there was a beautiful light; it showed the drake's true colors.
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Hit me where it hurts! I am already wearing the helmet and the body protection. Seriously: write what you think. I can use the lesson. Thank you!

Shutter Speed: 1/500
F-stop: f/6.3
Focal length: 300mm
Tripod: no
Flash: no

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Very nice capture Pieter, excellent detail and I like the shallow DOF. You done right in showing a little sky but I may have placed the duck either to the top or bottom left of frame for better composition. BTW nice frame great note.

hey pieter, nice shot.i like the ducks pose :)
the blurred clump of grass in front is a little disturbing imo,the colours are good,i also think the frame is a bit to heavy, composition is good, the duck isn't to centered,well done!

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2005-07-25 15:58]

He is s beautiful fellow Pieter, and you show hid brilliant colours off perfectly. His detqails and pose are great. He might be sleepy, but he still has his eye on you. Well done.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-07-25 17:28]

Hi Pieter, very nice shot of this duck. It's different to the average duck shot and very enjoyable. Nice sharpness and composition. Well done.

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  • chiliu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1457 W: 0 N: 1176] (6526)
  • [2005-07-25 17:39]

Hi Pieter,
Excellent shot!
Very nice colour, good catchlight in the eye,
nice framing.
TFS!

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  • zakiwi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 20 N: 274] (1309)
  • [2005-07-25 17:44]

Hey Pieter,

Nice shot man --- DOF is perfect, and the glint in the eye is excellent. Well done and TFS

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  • AndyB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 32 N: 1351] (3982)
  • [2005-07-25 18:27]

Hello Pieter,
This is a very nice shot.
The colours are lovely,the details nice and sharp.
Excellent DOF and a good job with the framing.
Great shot,well done.

TFS

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1538 W: 5 N: 2240] (12636)
  • [2005-07-25 23:33]

Le focus est parfait il donne un bel effet de floue autour du sujet.

Félicitations pour les couleurs et l'exposition.

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  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2005-07-26 3:35]

Beautiful and interesting shot for this superb sleepy duck ! Composition, colors, details and sharpness are great ! Thanks for sharing Pieter.

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-07-26 3:44]

Hello Pieter!
Very nice capture.DOF you managed,colors,POV,lighting and composition are excellent.TFS...:-)

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-07-26 5:21]

Hi Pieter! Very interesting note ;-) Nice scene, I like blurred BG, and of course pose of duck. Focus is spot on, sharpness and colours very good.

Hi Pieter!
So nice pose :-) It would be a perfect shot... but IT IS a DUCK :-)!!!!!!

Hello Pieter!
Wonderful shot.POV and details are perfect.I liked composition very much.Thanks for sharing.

Really like this resting pose Pieter! Excellent colors, light, details and sharpness..The bold frame works well for this one IMO.

Hi Pieter
Great Sleepy duck, color and sharpness
TFS
In a friendly way Christophe

Hey Pieter

I think this is the same duck as in your 'true colours' post, am I right? In that post, I think I said that your DOF was too shallow. In this case, it fits the mood of the shot and also your title. Everything else about the shot is excellent, although it's a shame the shade is hiding the colours of the head in this one.
Well done.
Andy.

This is an unusual composition but I like it Pieter. I have to agree with Andy on the light on the face of the duck though. Is this the blur effect the original DOF effects or did you use a blurroing tool on it?

Hello Pieter,
this is a wonderful picture of a male duck. I like it very much. Good job.

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-07-26 15:51]

Pieter, this is, to me, a different shot.

Maybe because of the frame, because of the pov...

Anyway, I do enjoy pov and vivid colors.

A great shot.

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  • Denis Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 178] (12)
  • [2005-07-26 20:27]

Hi Pieter. I like unusual pictures and this is one, starting with the mallard duck position and the viewing angle. The lighting,the vanishing colors, the contrast and the shallow depth of field make that picture interesting. Well done.

Hi Pieter,
A very nice composition. I like the shallow DOF, and great pose you have captured. Looks like you woke him up and he is eyeing you. Beautiful color and sharp detail. Nice Work!

Scott

Nice shot Pieter,
Nicely exposed, good detail and colours, the BG blur is good, I think the duck is centred, and would look a bit better more to the top right of the image. I do like the low POV.
Thanks for posting.

Beautiful natural shot - very clear and colorful. Fantastic composition and great details. Superb colors. Well done & TFS!

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  • halki Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 242 W: 9 N: 105] (471)
  • [2005-07-27 6:44]

Hello Pieter!
Very nice scane.I liked bright colors,lighting POV and composition.Thanks for posting.

Hello Pieter

I like the shot but I find the blurred parts distracting and there looks like a halo around the head. Excellent catchlight in the eye. The light has allowed for some good plumage detail and colour. Nice pose from Sleepy! Thanks

Sorry, but I can't hit you this time, must wait for other ocassion ;)
The photo is superb, has great quality, perfect light and composition.
I like it very much.
WELL DONE!

Hi Pieter,
Hitting is not a nice thing to do, especially if it hurts, but if it helps, good. LOL

Hey, great shot, POV.
The composition is a little too close for comfort, but, it is somewhat out of center and like I said, close, too close. Hehe
I don't know if you had a spasm with your hand in post pro, the blurring is abit too heavy.
On a high note, I do like your approach on this one. good effort. :) :)

Great capture, Pieter. The sharpness is absolutely spot on, and the skewed horizon adds interest. Beautiful colors and lighting. Another good one from you!

Cheers,
Alli

Pieter, ducks are not my favourite animals, but I must say that DOF in this shot took my interest. Maybe is not your best quality but the double OOF effect makes it this time.
Interesting photo.

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  • optic Gold Star Critiquer [C: 322 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-02 7:20]

Good morning Pieter,
You did a great shot very well composed, nice colours & light, sharpness DOF & POV are great. I like your frame, thanks for the note.

Regards,
Christian

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2005-08-02 17:23]
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Hi Pieter!
I wish to receive a critic/comment from you with your new way of doing them, so I will give you a long and personnal one for this photo.
First, I find the frame too large.
Second, I like very much the OOF for the front and the back.
Then, to put the eye in the center of the composition forces the glance of the observer to go to this place, what shows certain talent for the composition.
The little stick and the blue zone are disturbing.
The PoV is excellent. To be to the height of the subject is always rewarding.
The grass too is disturbing. I think a good photo must contain only the visual information needed. Not more, nor less. It is why a bird in flight is always well appreciated.
The note is great and more than complete.
It took me an half an hour to write this. It is why I use normally a speedy way to write feed-back: 20 X 1/2 = 10 hours. I cant do that.
I wish you will stay, Pieter, not for me or anyone else, but for you. Have Fun!
TFS

Hi Pieter. A perfect duck shot, excellent detail and pose. You have captured his colouring perfectly.
In my opinion the frame is too large. I also find the grass and water quite distracting, was it blurred?
Thanks for posting.

It's avery nice picture, Pieter.
AS other mention the frame is to big.
The head is little to dark but I know it's hard to get it right. I can see a small halo around the head it i'm nitpicking but thats just a minor nit.
Otherwise it's a very good picture with good POV, well composed and very nice colours.
Very well done.
I have been in the same situation as you. In the end of 2004 I left TN for the same reason as you. But I return after a couple of weeks. It's not good when 10% of the members stands for 50% of the comments.
Pls stay we need people like you, my friend.

Regards
Gert

Very nice capture Pieter. The mallard really looks very relaxed, almost sleeping. I like the low pov, together with the composition and the little sky in the left corner it works great here. Also you have both the foreground and the background blurred which drags the eyes towards the mallard. The colours are perfect.

All over a very pleasant picture to look at. Only tiny personally nit - I think I would crop jus 1/4 of the space in the left side to bring the mallard a little more out of centre vertically too but it sure is a minor thing.

Pieter,
Deze is zeker mooi.
Ik weet niet of je het weet maar in het begin san de site. Ik was ook een van de eerste leden, het ging toen om net zo'n gedoe als nu over kritiek en zo. Ik werd boos en haalde mijn foto's van de site. I werd vervolgens geroyeerd als lid. En ik kan je zeggen Pieter, dat deed zeer. Erg zeer. Ik mocht bijna 5 maanden niet op de site inloggen. En met veel gedoe ben ik dankzij Robert weer op de site terug gekomen. Nou ik kan rustig zeggen dfat ik hem gemist heb. Pieter, neem 1 ding van me aan. Je kritieken zijn goed, fe fotografie is verbeterd. Het zal moeilijk worden dit zomaar opzij te zetten. Pieter, Ik hoop dat je blijft.
gr. jaap

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2005-08-08 2:50]

Stunning work Pieter. I like how visible the DOF is in this shot. The DOF just envelopes the duck and adds a lot of impact to the image. Excellent sharpness as well.

Very well done and thanks for posting

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  • sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 85 N: 319] (1276)
  • [2005-08-08 6:32]

Hi Pieter,
Nice duck, great photo.
I like your POV.
Nice focus on the eye.
:)

Hi Pieter, nice captured of this duck! I like the centered duck is this compositon. I agree the blurred grass in the foreground is distracting to my eye. It is great how you have kept such a clear detail of his eye since it seems that is a key element to the photo since it shows his expression. He seems as if he is "keeping his eye" on you! Very nicely done. BTW, I appreciate your the camera setting info. :-)

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 244 W: 17 N: 494] (3259)
  • [2005-08-29 11:29]

it is a very clear shot...
amazing colors and a great light...
he is looking at you by the way...
well done Pieter...
so nice composition

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2006-07-25 15:11]

Una perfecta imagen para convertirla en carátula de un libro de poesía.
Suaves detalles, con un efecto alrededor del ave que brinda a la foto un aire de melancolía.
Gracias por compartirla Pieter.

A perfect image to convert it in cover page of a poetry book. Smooth details, with an effect around the bird that offers to the photo a melancholy air.
Thanks for sharing Pieter.

Composition: *****
Sharpness: ****
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DOF: ****
POV: *****
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