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Cabbage white


Cabbage white
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Copyright: Joanna Wieczorek (cafecrem) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1201 W: 60 N: 1392] (9248)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-02
Camera: Olympus 765UZ
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Butterflies Chapter2 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-07-10 14:06
Viewed: 4037
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I found it on my father's meadow :-) Special place for me...
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Excellent DOF and focus, Joanna ! The details are so good, so sharp...
What about just a little more light ? I post a workshop for you.
Well done anyway, thank you !

Very nice capture Joanna. Very good dof to get all of the butterfly in focus. The colours are very natural and the tight composition is interesting but like Martine I find it a little dark - Martine's WS is better.

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  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1237 W: 130 N: 882] (2821)
  • [2005-07-10 15:22]

Great shot of a Pieris brassicae (Linnaeus, 1758)!
A very common butterfly all arround the world.

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  • Kaszek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 50 N: 391] (1451)
  • [2005-07-10 15:41]

Ladny motylek. Ja ostatnio tylko na karlatki trafiam, ktore i tak trudno "upolowac". A Ty co troche jakis inny ;) Gratulacje!

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-07-10 16:09]

Psycho eyes and long sucker ;-) Very common butterfly in our neighbourhood. Quite nice but slightly annoing when it comes to capture it ;-) Very good photo with interesting POV and composition.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2005-07-10 16:53]

Hi Joanna, I hope you had a good weekend away. This White Cabbage Butterfly lives in NZ too. A pest in our vege gardens. The white of the flower show how un-white the butterfly really is. Excellent sharp capture, perfect focus, but I am sorry you cut off his wing and feeler. But well done.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-07-10 17:21]
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Hello Joanna, nice shot. Good details and comoposition. It's a pity you lost the wing tip. Well done.

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  • chiliu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1457 W: 0 N: 1176] (6526)
  • [2005-07-10 21:23]

Hi Joanna!
Very good close-up, great colour and details, excellent composed.
TFS!

Hi Joanna,
A nice macro shot. Very sharp detail. I agreed it was cropped alittle to tight. Beautiful colors!
Scott

Lovely capture Joanna, nice detail and focus. Wing is alittle clipped but still a great macro,well done.

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-07-11 2:39]

Hello Joanna!
Wonderful capture.Colors,details,POV,DOF and composition are wonderful.TFS...:-)

Hello Joanna!
Lovely shot.Details,POV and composition are excellent.Thanks for sharing.

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  • olar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-07-11 4:53]

Piekny. Naprawde robi wrazenie.

Nice macro Joanna, Very sharp and detailed. I think it could be a tiny bit lighter. Well done!

Nice shot Joanna,
Well composed, good detail, colours and sharpness.
Nicely captured, good POV and DOF.
Thanks for posting

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-07-12 19:28]

Joanna, nice shot under the shadows.

Great pov and composition. I like the mood here.

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  • ewa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-07-15 2:51]

Motylek naprawde wyjatkowo ladny. W tym ujeciu wyglada jak olbrzym, zwlaszcza jego skrzydla.

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  • ian Gold Star Critiquer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-07-15 7:24]

Welcome Joanna!
Great photo. I like it very much. Your photos are great.

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