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My Jewellery

My Jewellery
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Copyright: Markus Peissard (Heaven) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 123 N: 2341] (7912)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12
Camera: Pentax 67
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-26 10:04
Viewed: 3767
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mon Bijou

Les gouttelettes,
Mes perles.
La feuille morte,
Le plateau d’ambre.
Le granite,
La table de marbre.
Le tout,
Mon bijou préféré.
Puisqu’il est éphémère,
Je le porterai toujours
Bien protégé
Au fond de mon cœur.


My Jewellery

The droplets,
My pearls.
The dead leaf,
The amber tray.
The granite,
The marmoreal table.
The whole,
My favourite jewellery.
Because it’s ephemeral
I always will have it on me
Well protected
In the shelter of my heart.

Taken with my Pentax 67 in the bed of my favourite home river Ärgera, scanned, saved as TIFF and converted and cropped for TN.

Kind regards


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  • valy67 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1727 W: 59 N: 3060] (9219)
  • [2007-11-26 10:30]

Hello markus !
This is a beautiful photot, so simple... Often you don't need much to make a nice picture, and you show it here. The 'jewels' on the leaf are wonderful. Maybe I would have cropped a bit at the top and at the sides of the pictures, so the leaf would have more importance within the frame of the picture, ut it is also nice as it is. Well done !

Hello Markus,
This is another trully beautiful and very artistic composition in perfectness!
Total clarity and sharpness, beautiful colouration and so much details in it!
the droplets is a real beauty to me!
very well done
have a wonderful day, my dear friend!

Hello Markus,

You are ingenuous and imaginative! You have created a frame out of thin air. Congrats!


Hello Markus
This is spot on...I love the bronzes varying in shade with the water droplets..Im thinking of things to say but all i can say is I really like this...its such a simple and strong composition taken photographically so well...Great work
tfs and best regards

Hi Markus,

great details quality, the drops look great! Nice colors.



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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 67 N: 645] (6814)
  • [2007-11-26 23:58]

Joli support pour ces belles goutelettes.
Bonne journée.

Markus you are a true romantic..and French speaking as well...I guess you have troubles keeping certain folks away:-) A beautiful photo...the patterns of nature and softness combined with sharp...like the west meets the east.

hello markus,
wow, your jewellery looks beautiful, the ability to find the beauty in natures creation is gifted rarely, where most of the people like me ignore it simply some people like you or bob have this capability to spot it and present it with beauty and the notes which make a lot of sense.
well done,
tfs & regards

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  • anel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 3053 W: 3 N: 8715] (40574)
  • [2007-11-27 6:54]

Hallo Markus,
Il est vrai qu'il n'y a pas de plus beau bijou qu'une goutellette d'eau illuminée par un rayon de lumière. Très bien vu, magnifiques couleurs naturelles.
Un grand merci

Another beautiful one! The composition and colors were unbeatable in the previous post i think, but this one is a jewel too just like you said!TFS

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  • Jamesp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1369 W: 9 N: 6334] (18906)
  • [2007-11-27 23:56]

Hi Markus

Lovely and well observed shot expertly captured.


Bonsoir Markus
C'est vrai qu'elle est très belle cette feuille 'porte gouttes'. l'effet est très resplendissant.
Merci de cette bonne idée

Bonjour Markus,

Une belle image de cette feuille recouverte de gouttes d'eau, la photo a une bonne compoistion, netteté et de jolies couleurs. Bonne journée.


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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2007-12-02 4:19]

Hello Markus,
This is a beautiful capture in lovely colours. Most of all I like the pearl decorated pendant! Excellent sharpness and a fine composition.
TFS and regards, Ulla

Hi Markus,
This camera produces really sharp images. This must be a really great piece of equipment. How large are your TIFF files for this photos?
I really love the sharpness in the waterdrops and how the captured the different colors of the leave. A very beautiful abstract photo.

Hello Markus! Beautiful objects. Amazing lightness and sharpness. Very original composition. Best regard!

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2791 W: 0 N: 6696] (25839)
  • [2008-12-04 18:08]

Hi Markus,
thanks for visiting and post and commented on my White-throated Kingfisher. Really appreciate it.
When I looked at the responses, there are only three as it now, but it gives me a lot of useful information as more than 300.
First of all, I gave the wrong ID ( I should get zero for that matter :).
Secondly, the sybolism and hidden interpretation means a lot and it should be considered seriously. ( Your saying the metallic post worth more than the bird). This leads into poor composition.
Thirdly, no matter what and no matter how - the overall minimun element shoud be reached ..eg blue bg not the bleak one should be given a great consideration before posting .. ( If not dont post it :) )
Fourthly, believe in your conscience and thought as I think I could feel it beforte posting : ).
Thanks again for the critique and really appreciate it.
As for your shot, I say it beautiful..
Well taken with the complementing surrounding well composed and superbs clarity and sharp eyes to notice abstract art of the nature.


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