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Great Tit

Great Tit
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Copyright: Matthew Stilwell (PixelBurner) Silver Note Writer [C: 1 W: 0 N: 13] (186)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-05
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 70-300mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-07 5:02
Viewed: 4089
Points: 3
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Hi Matthew,

Its a beautiful portrait of the bird :) thanks for sharing, here is my 2 cents

* do you think there could have been more space in front of the beak ?

* In increase in DOF would have done good i guess as the head and tail are ever so slightly out of focus, but the middle of the bird is in clear sharp focus.

* Just maybe, do you think the details in the white patch could be improved near the eye by digging into the RAW file ?

* The cut in the tail could have been avoided

Thanks again

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  • sily Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 6 N: 395] (1934)
  • [2006-07-28 20:48]

Hi Matt!
Great shot every little detail is given, very sharp and focused, really good work the only thing that gets in a way is that frame is too close to the bird, needs more background space!TFS!

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