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Tulipa systola

Tulipa systola
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Copyright: Ori Fragman Sapir (fragman) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3032 W: 11 N: 2351] (43778)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2018-03-02
Categories: Flowers
Camera: Nikon D750, Nikon 105mm F2.8 "G" ED/IF VR macro
Exposure: f/18.0, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2018-03-10 2:48
Viewed: 711
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A striking desert bulb, Leaves few, wavy. Flowers single, dark blood red. Eatch perianth segment has a distinct black patch at the base.
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Hi Ori,
thanks for your presentation of this showy desert tulip in its natural setting. When I was bicycling around Eilat (Elifaz, Timna) in April last year I did not see any tulips. Maybe this was too late. Not being a botanist did not help.
Greetings, Dietrich

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2018-03-10 11:12]

Hi Ori,magnificent wild tulips from my prefered POV,very good details on the left and a very bright red,well done! Have a nice evening and thanks,Luciano

👋 Hello Ori,
Truly 'striking 🏜 desert bulb' ☺ and You captured it nicely. I like low POV and excellent depth on petals. In my humble opinion, left three flowers 💐 could have been better option to make a frame 🤔. In such way you could get rid of bit out of focus flower (right side in the frame). Moreover, ODD NUMBER COMPOSITION would have been better choice, not only following RULE ☺ but also bit soothing for eyes.
Otherwise very nice presentation ☺
Thanks for sharing your work with us 😊
Regards and have a nice week 😊

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