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Copyright: Yves Arel (chrido) (16)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-10
Categories: Ocean
Camera: Fuji FinePix F10
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-02-10 12:36
Viewed: 3810
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
... lors d'un petite semaine de vacance cette hiver sur la côte ouest .
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Bienvenue Yves, welcome aboard in TN.

I would like to offer a few comments:
a) the horizon in a seascape shot should generally be "flat" so the water doesnt run off to the left side...
b) on TN I would suggest a minimum of "man-made structures",
such as that ugly box in the lover right coorner.
Often you can achieve that by changing your PoV,
or where that isn't gonna work, by cropping the photo.
c) some Notes on what we are looking at that is worthwhile...

Hope my comments will help you, au revoir, Jay

Welcome to TN Yves, I hope you enjoy your stay. You'll learn a great deal about photography through the critique process. The very first thing I learned was about having a level horizon, (I still forget sometimes!) Another fun thing to do is look at the workshops done by others, and start trying your own. I've found that other peoples photos are more fun to work with than my own sometimes.
I love the bright glow of your sunset, I've never seen a "Bad" sunset, have you? I look forward to seeing more of your photos, well done with this one.

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