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Copyright: Jason Ervin (ervinjn) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 7] (77)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-01-10
Exposure: f/3.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-01-14 14:59
Viewed: 2653
Points: 1
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English Ivy in a January ice storm.
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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 282 N: 4931] (19883)
  • [2011-01-14 22:10]
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Hello Jason,
This would be a super image if only it had a little more depth of field to it. I Love the overall composition, bright vivid colors and wonderful exposure, but the focus seems a little soft on the berries in the foreground as well as those in the BG. The two in the middle are in sharp focus and show very good detail.
The f/3.8 aperture setting doesn't seem to be enough to obtain the DOF that you need for overall sharpness in this particular shot.
I noticed in your gallery that the majority of your photos are taken with an aperture setting of f/2.7, but I also see that you used an aperture setting of f/5.3 on your toad shot and an f/5.8 in your jellyfish photo. In these particular photos you achieved excellent DOF and the sharpness and detail is very good throughout the entire image. I really don't want to sound too harsh, I wish only to be of some help in future shots.
Ron

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