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Autumn Window


Autumn Window
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Copyright: Evelynn Smith (Evelynn) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2025 W: 741 N: 3285] (14454)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-10
Categories: Trees, Mountain
Camera: Canon 400D Digital Rebel XTi, Canon 17-85 IS, @ ISO 200
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Silpa's "Unforgettable" Favourites !!!, Autumn At Trek Nature [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-10-16 9:37
Viewed: 4904
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I might have titled this "The Last Hurrah" as the next day a week long+ heavy winter snow storm hit the area and eliminated visibility. Even though I love fall colors in the snow the weather was too much for us to negotiate with our camper... so we made a hasty retreat. Even so, the few shots I did get made the trip worthwhile.

Uploading images to TN with accurate color saturation is giving me fits. I have to adjust images that look correct on my Mac to Standard Windows Color. There is a way for me to preview them but I am never sure if they are over done or underdone... so to speak. One of these days I'll have to check out my gallery on a PC.

techranger, aes_thor, siggi, jconceicao, livius, iris, eqshannon, SelenE, NinaM, anel, writerscrawlz, vanderschelden, Adanac, uleko, SunToucher, gracious has marked this note useful
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A very beautiful autumn scene Evelynn. I really love the way the mountains in the background are framed by the ground and the brillant trees. Good to hear that you hightailed it out of there in the nick of time. Well presented. :) TFS

Larry

Hi Evelynn,

another beautiful autumn landscape. Great view on mountains below the tree, blue and red makes here very nice contrast.
Saturation is quite strong but still looks natural and good. Very nice composition.

cheers
Adrian

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  • nagraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1618 W: 106 N: 3208] (15166)
  • [2008-10-16 10:10]

hi evelynn,
beautiful image, well composed and exposed too. i wish i were there kind of image. saturation looks fine, not overdone. tfs.
nagraj.v

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  • siggi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3097 W: 109 N: 12399] (52850)
  • [2008-10-16 10:50]

Hello Evelynn,
wow, colours of autumn! Very nice. A like the background with the mountains and the sky.
Very beautifully composition.
Regards,
Best regards Siggi

Hello Evelynn,

Lovely picture.
Beautiful colours with excellent detalhe.
Lighting and composition are superb.
Good notes.

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  • livius Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 300 W: 0 N: 391] (1525)
  • [2008-10-16 11:29]

Hello Evelynn
beautifulst the shadings of vivid colors of the leaves, beautiful the contrast and the fine details of the leaves thanks to a light good hand. Great for hoods and mountains on the background.
Livio

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  • iti Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 577 W: 0 N: 650] (7939)
  • [2008-10-16 12:33]

Hi Evelynn
Nice photo very nice.
Regards Jiri.

The color seems to be fine to me. Great scene, nice fall colors

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  • iris Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 60 N: 970] (3088)
  • [2008-10-16 15:25]

Hello Evelynn,
The title seems perfectly fine for this original concept that you present.

The contrast between the fall in the FG and the snow clad mountains in the BG looks all the more wonderful when one looks through the natural arch that you brought into the frame. How i wish i could go see this place for myself!!!!I cant imagine how the weather changed and the place got buried in snow.
The saturation is perfect for me.

I'm so glad you captured this wonderful "unforgettable" moment and doing full justice to the colours and concept.
Thanks a ton and cheers
Silpa
P.S:Would love to add this to my "unforgettable" theme:)

Hello Evelynn,
That's a window!
It surely made your trip worthwhile.
I have a PC (unfortunately?) and your colors are just great.
As a matter of fact it's a visual feast.
Beautiful, lady!
TFS
Annick

Superb use of framing by the trees...You have caught many things...geology, weather in two distinct seasons guided by only altitude and gosh knows what all else I am missing...it is your field of expertise as I have mentioned before...I would stop at your place on the way top Cali and have a cup of tea...perhaps with a shot of rum and sweets for a salute to the season.
Bob
...yeah really I would!

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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 282 N: 4931] (19883)
  • [2008-10-16 19:35]

Stunning image Evelynn,
Almost like viewing two distinctly beautiful scenes in the same photo. The mountains in the BG are a real asset to an already wonderful image. Well done!!! perfect in every way!
Ron

hello evelynn,
what a beautiful capture, i loved the natural framing here, i liked everything about this capture, great guide for a amateur landscaper. goes to my fav. pictures.
well done,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2008-10-16 22:15]

Amazing composition, Evelynn.
The colors are wonderful.
You know what is so interesting in this...
The foreground is the grass and trees, making a perfect frame.
The mountains, which are the big and strong elements, look small and ephemeral in the distance.
Something about this reversed status throws me off balance, which makes this image so attractive to me.
If you know what I mean...
TFS. : )

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2249 W: 65 N: 4205] (13972)
  • [2008-10-17 0:03]

Hi Evelynn,
It's a beautiful photo. Scenery, composition, DOF, POV, natural framing, light and exposure control are very good. TFS
Best wishes,
Selen

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2008-10-17 1:42]

What a beautiful picture window you have here Evelynn. So colourfully framed with teh autumn leaves.
Super view of the mountains in the BG
TFS
Janice

Hello Evelynn
Beatiful reddish window,, contrasting with the white-blue of the mountains from the backgound.
Kind regards, Oana

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  • inked Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 0 N: 249] (771)
  • [2008-10-17 5:47]

hi Evelynn,
great composition! love the framing through the trees, the natural gradient of the trees, the range of color.. really nicely done.. and saturation looks good to me too
Gethin

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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 773 W: 3 N: 1157] (4077)
  • [2008-10-17 16:00]

Amazingly beautiful, you captured the grandeur of this renowned place in a stunning landscape. What I particularly like in this picture are the two different scales, the one at the tree's scale opening on the grandiose mountains in the back, huge and beautiful. Thank you Evelynn,

Francine

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  • anel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 3053 W: 3 N: 8715] (40574)
  • [2008-10-18 2:37]

hello Evelynn,
What a beatiful window!! Great landscape-shot showing autumnal colors already mixed with first manifestations of wintertime in the back. The Teton park seesm a source of inspiration for a lot of people. It must great to be there.
Best regards
Anne

Hello Evelynn
No worry your colours are real and really stunning!even on my PC!
Great composition with a window on the mountains in the BG
Well done
Albert

What an incredible landscape! The colors are shouting, begging to be noticed - and notice them I did!

The composition is perfect, as is the exposure. Excellent clarity and I love how this goes from the small grains of stalks to the mountains - talk about All Things Big and Small (a favorite book I had as a child) - an excellent capture, my friend.

Kathy :-)

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 1 N: 6188] (21378)
  • [2008-10-18 18:52]

Hi My Friend,
This is going to my favorites too. The composition is outstanding Evelynn with the distant mountain framed by autumn colors/
Rick

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2008-10-18 23:24]

Hello Evelynn,
I love the way you've framed the distant mountains in wonderful autumn colours. Excellent DOF, wonderful colours and an excellent composition.
TFS and best wishes, Ulla

Hi Evelynn,
I had this whole story written and then pushed a wrong button. So I'll start over again.

I like the way you used a natural frame to frame the famous Tetons. I am sure that this has not been done that often. I also like the color contrast raning from warm brown to cool grey. The saturation looks fine to me and still feels very realistic. The details in the right tree are great, except for the top right corner. But I think that the chosen aperture caused some drop in sharpnes in the second tree. I know that cloning is against the TOS, but I would be tempted to clone out that little twig alsmost touching the mountain.
TFS,
Niek

Hello Evelynn,
Thank you for sharing this awesome autumn window with us from the National Park!
the mountains from the far distance is really nice!
good sharpness, wonderful colour and details
well done
regards
Tony

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2008-10-19 14:42]

Hello Evelynn! A beautiful and naturally framed composition. Perfect colors and a great exposure. Fantastic image!

Mario

Our favorite mountains, and you've added a lovely frame! I like the colors, too. vey inventive, Evelynn!

Although I don't doubt Niek, for my two cents the image seems crisp throughout. But maybe it's the 14 inch monitor I'm using on my laptop.

Mike

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