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Waiting for lunch


Waiting for lunch
Photo Information
Copyright: Claudio Villarroel (Zakk72) (2)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-20
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-21 20:16
Viewed: 4275
Points: 2
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These birds were looking at my sandwich while I was looking at them...
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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 773 W: 3 N: 1157] (4077)
  • [2009-03-23 18:52]

This is a cute picture, Claudio, those two lovely birds looking at your sandwich. I like the pose they take and the nice blurred background, green in contrast with the greyness of the foreground. Maybe the composition would look better if you would crop the bottom of the picture a little bit to make disappear the vertical bars of the bench at left. Also, you could crop to take out partially the bird at the extreme left and this in order to isolate the two birds, your subject. You would get an almost entire green background with the bird and what's left of the bench in duller tones. Yet the picture is beautiful and welcome to TrekNature! I am looking to see more of your pictures of your wonderful country.

Francine

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