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Caryocar brasiliensis


Caryocar brasiliensis
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Luiz Jivago Rolo (Jivago) (7)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-09-24
Categories: Flowers
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-27 16:30
Viewed: 3806
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Flor de Pequi da minha fazenda, sem manuseio nenhum, note a beleza dela.
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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 256 W: 64 N: 481] (2140)
  • [2006-09-27 16:56]
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Hi Jose,
Welcome to TN,
on this shot you should have tried a diff. POV to get a better frame,
pointing the camera down may not always work for all sorts of subjects,
here we see your subject well, but the B/G (back-ground) the mud is not separated, looks flat and takes too much away from the actual subject... the tiny flower.
Try framing techniques before posting your other shot :)

Hope you don't mind my humble advise :)

Cheers,
Vishal Sabharwal

MAGNIFIQUE FLEUR JOSE
belle composition et exposition,bon travail
bonne soirée
edith

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