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Flower and Bee


Flower and Bee
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Copyright: Steven Dabbah (stevend) (9)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-27
Categories: Flowers
Camera: Cannon EOS Rebel XTi, 18-55mm
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-08 18:13
Viewed: 3457
Points: 3
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Photo taken after a brief rain at the gardens of the Bhudist Temple Zu Lai in the city of Cotia, close to São Paulo - Brasil.
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To pvs: Thanksstevend 1 04-11 20:01
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Olá Steven,
A composição da foto está boa, mas parece faltar um pouco mais de definição.
Creio que se você reduzisse o espaço do fundo que está desfocado, aumentasse contraste e níveis, obteria bons resultados. A isso eu acrescentaria uma moldura e a foto estaria pronta e de grande impacto, pois a flor, Bela Emília, esta muito bem focada, assim como a abelha.
Abraço do Raimundo

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  • pvs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1127 W: 254 N: 3161] (14464)
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Hi Steven,

Thanks for your visit on my folio and your positive comments,I as well started 1 and a half year ago on this site and saw my pictures getting better from time to time,with reading comments,tips and help of other TN members,as you say you think that your pictures loose quality after upload,I dont know if you are postprocessing your pictures with for example photoshop,but when you are reducing the size for upload you have to sharpen it,when you think your pictures look more blurred think of using a tripod and last but I think an important one is that you need the proper lense for what you willing to capture (ex macro for close up and a telelens for birds and other wildlife).
This is a nice shot with nice colors and subject,but it could improve with some of the tips above,


Regards,Paul

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