a week later
nice photo but i'd recommend lightening it and shaprening
this is an excellent story shot. A real rarity.
I'm sorry to say that lens, I should think, has really let you down. You've got colour aberations and some barrel distortion. None of your making.
I would ditch it on e-bay and get either the Canon to compliment your camera or the Sigma 18-200 especially the new one with anti-shake.
Other than that, the PoV and the DoF work well.
Nice and candid.
Very nice capture .But unfortunatly I have to agreed with previous comnents.