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seagulls having a seaview


seagulls having a seaview
Photo Information
Copyright: LuDivine Laurent (LuDivine) (47)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-11
Categories: Birds, Ocean
Camera: Nikon D70s Digital SLR Camera
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-08-15 4:00
Viewed: 4759
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another ocean view.. I know, but arent they pretty and inspiring!!! I could just stare at the ocean all day!

This was taken in Papamoa, in front is the Pacific Ocean! I loved seeing those seagulls flying away, I took few shots and this one came out the best, I liked the positions of their wings, very different from the one by itself on the right!

Have a nice day/night!

LuDivine

EDIT: I have posted in the workshop a new version of this photo, taking notes of the critiques from Niek (suntoucher).

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  • jesst Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 0 N: 172] (2441)
  • [2007-08-15 4:03]

I like colors and composition.

Hi LuDivine,
The mood captured in this photo is wonderful. The composition with the island positioned on the right 1/3 axis is good. However the horizon isn't running straight. This is really a necessity with seacape photography. It might also be better to have to horizon less centered. The birds to add a lot to the photo. I am not so sure what happend on the right edge of the photo. It seems you missed a part in your PP work.
TFS,
Niek

Hi LuDivine,

I am it entirely once with the criticism of Suntoucher. But the mood is indeed wonderful. Only I find the photo a bit to dark. POV and BG are oké. Regards and TFS Bob

Hi LuDivine

the workshop version is significantly better, well done.
The re-worked composition with a straight horizon is very nice. the gulls really add to the shot. Seascapes can be very soothing, this one is.

Chris

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