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Effect of water


Effect of water
Photo Information
Copyright: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1769 W: 424 N: 2889] (14697)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-28
Categories: River
Camera: Canon 350D, sigma 28-90 aspherical
Exposure: f/14.0, 30 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-19 9:57
Viewed: 3810
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
bonjour a tous.
aujoud' hui j'essai encore un paysage,ou plutot un effet d'eau.je n'ai obtenu le resultat attendu car le debit d'eau etait assez faible mais j'attend cette fois encore vos reactions.
je ne possede pas de grand angle,donc l'image a été coupé pour donner un effet panorama.

Hello everyone.
Aujoud Today I try again a landscape, or rather an effect of water. I have got the expected result because the debit of water was quite low but I would like to once again your reactions.
I do not own wide angle, so the picture was cut to give a panorama effect.

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Fantastic effect, Laurent, I'm jelous when I see such silky water, not easy to do.
You made it perfect, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hello Laurent
What a wonderful scene you captured,
Perfect focusing,exposure and POV,Superb shot,
Welldone.

Regards
fartashphoto.com

Hello Laurent
Your dof here is perfect picking up all the glorious textures of the moss covered stream..the colours are perfect and you have taught us all a lesson that we dont need a super wide lense to achieve a large landscape scene.
best regards
paul

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2007-11-19 10:46]

Hi Laurent.
What a crisp sharpness of the image. Great details, lights and shadows. Excellent colour reproduction and attractive pictured scene. My compliments.
Alexei.

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2883 W: 30 N: 9683] (36145)
  • [2007-11-19 11:14]

Hi Working late again so just marking for now. .TFS.
Nick..

Nice shot Laurent.
I love the smooth water that you've blurred perfectly... as Sabine said: It's not easy to do!
I love the composition though I think if you flipped it horizontally... it may work better. I did a workshop to show this.
Nice lighting and colours aswell.
Well done,
Joe

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2232 W: 10 N: 2971] (16891)
  • [2007-11-19 12:08]

Hola Laurent,
sensacional trabajo y pov,
los detalles hermosos, magníficos efectos...
saludos

Bonsoir Laurent,
4 ou 5 eme fois que j'ouvre cette image et l'inspiration des mots ne vient pas, d'habitudes tes photos me parlent mais celle ci se laisse juste regarder, ce qui n'est déjà pas si mal et finalement c'est bien le but d'une image
bravo ,
amicalement,
Pat

Acertado formato con elegantes formas y bonitos
colores. Bien captada el agua. Un bonito ejemplo
de composición de parte de una toma. A destacar
un agua finamente captada.


Saludos Laurent.

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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5038 W: 260 N: 15594] (50626)
  • [2007-11-19 22:43]

Bonjour Laurent,
The composition and eposure of this shot are superb. However the long exposure time has resulted in the usual 'steamy' effect on the water. This is not to my taste but others like the effect.
Here the natural effect of the water to create a damp mossy environment is well portrayed.
TFS,
Ivan

hello laurent,
nice post, the natural colours look beautiful, the slow shutter has resulted in good effect, well composed shot, very suitable pov,
well done,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 5 N: 3475] (15161)
  • [2007-11-20 1:26]

Hello Laurent,
a very nice composed picture with good POV.Nice colours and fine lighting.TFS

Bonjour Laurent,

J'aime bien la compo, le choix du format et l'effet de l'eau.
J'aime un peu moins la lumière blanche un chouya agressive..J'ai mis un petit coup de filtre dessus,dis-moi ce que tu en penses.

Servane

Hola Laurent,
Preciosa toma, me gusta el efecto conseguido con el agua, muy buena definición, color y luz, saludos
José Ramón

The 30 seconds has produced a nice smoothness through-out the "meandering" water course Laurent. Interesting photo with all the moss-covered logs about, good POV & comp too :)
PS - I think Joe's WS did help to focus more attention on the stream, with the 10% space rt cropped not really needed IMHO..
Well done,
Howard

Hello Laurent,
What a wonderful effect shot you present here!
Outstading details and excellent POV with suitable exposure.
You've got very beautiful effect shot of this water.
Well presented and TFS,
Best wishes,
Kevin

Hi Laurent,
A beautiful capture of stream of water. Nicely composed with very good DOF and nice blurring of water. Thanks a lot for sharing.

Bonsoir,
Oui, ce n'est pas seulement l'effet d'eau ici. En plus vous voyez que ce n'est pas nécessaire d'avoir un grand angle pour atteindre des belles photos!
Merci beaucoup!
Annick

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2007-11-20 18:49]

Bonjour Laurent, moi elle me parle et je lui réponds ! :-) Je l'aime bien moi ton paysage et même si l'effet d'eau n'est pas ce que t'attendais j'aime bien ton faux panorama. Pour sentir mieux l'effet d'eau il aurait peut-être fallu zoomé sur la partie de gauche du cours d'eau. Bon travail, merci !

Mario

salut LOLO
ton essai n'est pas mal du tout et je sais en connaissance de cause que ce n'est pas facile sans grand angle!!!! toutefois ton image est de parfaite netteté aux couleurs naturelles et jolies.
continues, tu y arriveras et pourquoi ne pas commander un grand angle au père NONO?????
bisous
edith

pt)

Salut Laurent

J’ai été plutôt occupé ces derniers jours mais je n’oublie pas mes amis de TN!
Alors j’espère pouvoir revenir dans les prochains jours pour pouvoir faire de
meilleures critiques :-) En attendant, salut mon ami!

Claude

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 998 W: 65 N: 1270] (5199)
  • [2007-11-30 6:24]

What a great picture, Laurent!!
I like a lot the crop and composition and the beautiful presentation.
Really good.
Best regards
Maite

Hello Laurent,
you captured the flowing water well, I like the -may I say- blurred effect you created. All those tones of green and brown are working well together.
Your way of cropping is interesting, I should try this with some of my pictures that are still on my computer. Maybe the will become better so I can show them here.
Thank you for sharing.
With kind regards,
Britta

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