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Snow dreams

Snow dreams
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Copyright: Markus Peissard (Heaven) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 123 N: 2341] (7912)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-25
Camera: KonicaMinolta Dynax7D
Exposure: f/22, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): posts with a difference [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-27 11:55
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Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Snow dreams

Why don’t you move,
And do not cry?
I’m deeply moved
But leave for good.

I was yours
And you were mine.
You keep the still,
Did I just dream?

I have to go,
Yet it was nice.
You’re so pale,
There’s no good-bye.

Kind regards


N.B. Taken in RAW, converted to TIFF, exp. correction, sharpness; then cropped and saved as jpg.

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  • nglen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2883 W: 30 N: 9683] (36145)
  • [2008-01-27 12:06]
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Hi Markus.You have this of to a fine art of which you are a master. The shapes and shadows in the snow picture are beautiful. your use of the light is very good. i can see many things in the shapes . very well done TFS.

ps are the notes your words.

Hi Markus,
I like that! This is well seen and realized, minimalist, original and very effective. Great notes too :)!

Hi Markus,
Magnifique, quelle belle POV, les rondeurs de l'hiver sont superbes, le jeu des ombres est extra. J'adore

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  • Jamesp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1369 W: 9 N: 6334] (18906)
  • [2008-01-27 14:48]

Hi Markus

Superb abstract - well seen composed and executed.


hello markus,
very nice capture, looks like a fine art, the shadows and the light have created magic here,
excellent work, nice composition,
tfs & regards

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  • NinaM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 773 W: 3 N: 1157] (4077)
  • [2008-01-27 20:10]
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Markus, c'est impressionnant, que c'est beau. Je sais que ce n'est pas beaucoup de vocabulaire pour critiquer une photo mais que dire de plus quand tout y est? C'est vraiment splendide, ces formes douces et sensuelles sont attirantes pour l'oeil. On dirait presque des corps nus qui sont endormis, c'est apaisant et presque onirique. Merci!


Belles séries de courbes douces et et agréablement contrastées.
Bonne journée.

I gotta be honest..You have such great emotive qualities in your work...I feel it important to warn my wife...to stay away..this man is the genuine romantic of the 21st century...Your images are not comparable to anything of snow in chaos I have done..yours have a tremendous evoking quality which I live..

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 26 N: 3879] (13882)
  • [2008-01-28 3:22]

Hi Markus,
dreamy, almost like something out of a Science Fiction film...wondeful light, sharp and well exposed...magicical.

Hi Markus!

The picture is so lovely with this unusual composition and lighting. Your notes and poems reflect a sad mood, that fits the shot and touches the heart, and despite the sadness makes good feelings to me at the same time by being so beautiful... Making us think all the time is something rare among the members but very useful thing that you do. Thanks for sharing that and the picture of course!

Best regards,

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  • jesst Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 0 N: 172] (2441)
  • [2008-01-28 6:52]
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Wonderful light and shadows, wonderful forms, b&w is great for such picture.

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1739 W: 224 N: 6872] (24909)
  • [2008-01-28 7:36]

Superb abstract Markus!
Very smooth and silky.
The lighting and shadows are splendid!
Very artistic.
Well done,

Un excelente y delicado trabajo Markus. Sencillez en las formas y simple temática, pero un logrado y artístico conjunto. Acertado formato.
Abrazo: J. Ignasi

Hola Markus.
Una original presentación.
Perfecta iluminación y buenos detalles.
Saludos, JL.

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2158 W: 224 N: 4749] (16656)
  • [2008-01-29 6:52]
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Hi Markus

Really delicate and beautiful! A very original yet typical post from you, my friend!
I really like the wonderful curves of the show here as well as the interesting "game" of lights and shadows on their surface...they really give such a terrific 3D effect to the scene.
The b&w conversion is also great and it makes this image and place "etherna"...it looks like time has no longer any effect over it. Very good work!

Bravo and TFS

Hi Markus,
Good to see you back. I do hope you are able to mix TN live with the rest of it. It can be very addictive.
The smooth surfaced bumps are very erotic and beautiful. The shades of from the tree on the bumps are prefect and add jsut the right amount of tonal difference.

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-01-30 19:42]

Hello Markus

This is a wonderful demonstration of light and shadow.
The illumination is super.
Very good POV and DOF.
You have artistically composed this beautiful image.
I find the undulating moguls stir the imagination.


Impressive! I don't know what i like better, the poem or the photo! The photo has a wonderful lighting and shadowing, with those snow bumps. I love snow dream! I dream of snow a lot. To go to the most abundant, and solitude mountains, and in a winter like setting, that it self would be a snow Dream! But very well written poem! I especially like this one, and have added it to my favorites! Thanks For sharing! Well said on a well photo~! Cheers Josh Lewis.

nice snow dunes, TFS Ori

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