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Copyright: Nicolas Degand (kb10) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 29] (155)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-04
Categories: Birds
Camera: Olympus C-750UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Ibis (family Threskiornithidae) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-09-13 13:41
Viewed: 4748
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
ibis in the Nakuru Lake in Kenia
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Welcome to TN, Nicolas. Nice first post. This is an image of the Sacred Ibis you have here.

Could do with a bit of sharpening.

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-09-13 18:04]

Bienvenido a TN Nicolas.
Interesante captura del ibis... tal vez apenas desenfocada.
Lamentablemente no informas nada sobre la especie, como tampoco sobre las otras aves que aparecen en la escena.
Es importante la inclusión de una nota donde los demás usuarios puedan conocer sobre la imagen, como así tambien sobre la cámara y los valores de exposición de la misma.
Buen intento.

Welcome to TN Nicolas.
Interesting capture of ibis... perhaps hardly defocused.
Lamentably you do not inform anything on the species, like either on the other birds that appear in the scene.
The inclusion of a note is important where the other users can know on the image, like thus also on the camera and the values of exposure of the same one.
Good attempt.

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  • Callie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 95 N: 2610] (7555)
  • [2004-09-14 14:39]

Hi Nicilas, and welcome to TN
This is a Sacred Ibis. We call them chimney sweepers, because of the black neck. The small guys looks like ruff & reeve, and the one in the back is a Black-winged stilt. Your compo is nice, but you need light on the eye to make it work and hold the attention of yur viewers. Use fill flash in these instances. And keep on trying, success WILL follow.

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