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Copyright: alin ma (alin-m) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 472 W: 1 N: 126] (1773)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-04
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon Coolpix L100
Exposure: f/5.4
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-22 6:12
Viewed: 3067
Points: 46
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Hello Alin! Nice pair, very nice scene, beautiful light and colors, good shot. Funny effect. Well done!

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  • horias Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 837 W: 58 N: 2084] (11033)
  • [2009-10-22 7:40]

Ce vrabiute dragute!
Si curate se pare ca!

Vrabiutele tale se imbaiaza de zor!
Cred ca le place apa!

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2009-10-22 9:34]

Hi Alin.
You managed to catch a cute pair of sparrows at so attractive moment. I like reproduction of the small waves around birds, excellent details of the sparrows, impressive lights and natural colours. MY kind regards and TFS.

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  • siggi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3097 W: 109 N: 12399] (52850)
  • [2009-10-22 11:50]

Hello Alin,
What a lovely little birds.Excellent capture with very nice colors and great sharpness.TFS.
Best regards Siggi

Buena pose de las aves y captura del agua, pero falta algo de control en la luz, que desvirtúa algo el plumaje de estos dos simpáticos gorriones.
Saludos Alin: Josep Ignasi.

Hi Alin,

A lovely and amusing capture of this bathing pair of sparrow.
TFS and cheers,


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  • cirano Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 997 W: 0 N: 944] (13609)
  • [2009-10-22 14:45]

Slav Alîn,
A very nice capture of these pair sparrow with excellent POV and very good sharpness.Nice colors,reflections and details.TFS.

Hi Alin
Lovely photo of the two bathing little birds...Well captured TFS

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2009-10-25 4:11]

Hi Alin,what a beautiful and tender moment,excellent light,sharpness and colors,i like a lot this kind of pics,my best compliments,have a nice Sunday,LUCIANO

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 957 W: 0 N: 1329] (6264)
  • [2009-10-27 3:57]

Sa traiasca !
Ce poza faina ! Exceptional redata, cu aceste vrabiute care s-au gindit ele sa faca o baita. Felicitari.
O saptamina faina,

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  • PeterZ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5137 W: 166 N: 13121] (49139)
  • [2009-10-27 4:39]

Hello Alin,
Good photo of these bathing sparrows. Good sharpness and natural colours. Beautiful light shining over the water. Nice moment.

Simpatica imagen de estos pajarillos bañandose captada con gran naturalidad y nitidez
Buen trabajo
un saludo

Hello Alin,

A very nice picture from this Sparrows with good pov and dod details.
fine natural colours.


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  • Argus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5038 W: 260 N: 15594] (50626)
  • [2009-10-27 13:10]

Hello Alin,
A fine shot of a male and female House Sparrow bathing.
Taken from a POV that shows the features in good sharpness and fine lighting. The lighting on the water ripples is great!
Thanks and best regards.

Hello Alin!

This is interesting shot of sparrows during their bath. Impressive framing and colors, but sharpness could be little better.

Anyway - well done!


Hallo Alin
Two little cuties you've captured here. Nice colours in the water and lovely detail on the birds. Very innocent and natural photograph, and very pleasing to the heart and eyes. I like the golden colours in the water. You have used the sunlight well to bring out the beautiful detail of the movement in the water. Best regards

Hello Alin,
a very beautiful picture of this pair of Sparrows, very good sharpness and splendid colours, a nice composition with a pleasing gilt reflections
Best regards

Hello Alin,
What an adorable capture of these two really cute couples enjoying their bathing time together. I can't do this with Laurie because our bath is to small, but still an inspirational capture and well timed as it displays two birds enjoying the best of times. Thank you so much for sharing!
Paul :)

Hello Alin,

Good details in the two water lovers!
This is a nice scene well captured, personally I might crop some to get closer on the cute subjects but that is a personal point of view...

Pablo -

Hi Alin,
Great moment you have captured of these two small sparrows.Nice light reflections off the water and small ripples from the birds.

Hello Alin.

Thank you for that picture of those two innocent birds.

Very good composition and point of view, full of emotion. I like the light on the water. I appreciate the movement from the water. The depth of field is excellent. The colors are very natural.

With your authorization, a small critic : in my opinion, the sharpness should have be better.

Thank you for the sharing.

See you soon on treknature for other pictures.

All the best.


hello Alin

very beautiful photo of this pair of sparrows taking their bath,
fine POV on them, i love the way the waves with the light on them
are framed on the image, fine focus to the birds with excellent
sharpness and details, beautiful catch-lights ont their eyes, TFS


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