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In the sunshine

In the sunshine
Photo Information
Copyright: Joanna Wieczorek (cafecrem) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1201 W: 60 N: 1392] (9248)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-16
Camera: Olympus 765UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 40-49 Points (Chapter 5) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-07-27 4:12
Viewed: 3205
Points: 45
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo shows that sunshines are the most beautiful part of the day not only for people...
Look at its shining wings, arent they just burninig?
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Hello Joanna!
Very nice scane.Lighting,details,BG,framing and composition are wonderful.Thanks for sharing.

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-07-27 4:20]

Looks like little, happy spark of sunlight! Lovely backlight and green BG. Meadows in Zelow seems to be chests full of gems ;-) I like it!

Hey Joanna,

Excellent DOF. The colors have such a nice contrast, but yet also so earthy.

Well done,


Absolument magnifique cette photo !
Les couleurs sur les ailes du papillons des aux rayons du soleil sont superbes.
Merci du partage.

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  • sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 85 N: 319] (1276)
  • [2005-07-27 4:27]

Hi Joanna, Nice photo. I too love the light through the wings.
Well done.
Nice focus and DOF

Hi Joanna,
Very good lighting, great colour, nicely composed.
Excellent shot!

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  • AndyB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 32 N: 1351] (3982)
  • [2005-07-27 5:12]

A great shot Joanna,
Nice backlight,excellent composition and good details.
Superb,well done.


Hello Mrs. W. ;-)
Beautiful natural shot - very clear and colorful. I like this little butterfly. Great light and details. Superb colors. Well done & TFS!
I wish you a good day

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  • VeTTe Gold Star Critiquer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 0] (684)
  • [2005-07-27 5:39]

It is unlucky of you; the leave of wheat comes to the wing of the butterfly.
Light is so violent but the composition,background is good.
the eyes of butterfly needs more sharpen..
Thanks for sharing ;)

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-07-27 5:56]

Hello Joanna!
Wonderful use of backlight.Clear details,colors,sharpness and composition are perfect.

good composing shot Joanna,
the light is good the composition is very good, only a shame that little green in front of the butterfly, great dof, very good job,
gr. jaap

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  • halki Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 242 W: 9 N: 105] (471)
  • [2005-07-27 6:33]

Hi Jonna!
Perfect backlight application.Also DOF,POV and framing are excellent.Thanks for posting.

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  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1237 W: 130 N: 882] (2821)
  • [2005-07-27 7:22]

Great shot!
I can't identify the species.
Very good contrast!

Great back-lit effect Joanna! Very good details and focus, Well done.

This is another beautiful shot Joanna!

I especially like the backlight, illuminating the wings of this butterfly, and casting the entire composition in warmth.

Well done, and thank you.

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-07-27 15:00]

Joanna, I like composition and lighting.

These backlit shots are always tricky, but I like this one.

Warm colors and great pov.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-07-27 16:23]

Hi Joanna, nice image. I love the lighting here. The composition is good too and you did well for what could have been a very messy and busy BG.

The Butterfly is hard to ID for sure from what I can see but it looks like a Small Heath Coenonympha pamphilus alothugh I really cannot be sure.

Well done.

Nice shot Joanna,
What a lovely sunny day you had. It's a shame about the small piece of grass covering the wing. The DOF is spot on and the colours are fantastic.
Thanks for posting

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  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2005-07-28 3:27]

Nice shot for this butterfly in sunshine ! Composition, colors, details and sharpness are very good ! Thanks for sharing Joanna.

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  • olar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-07-28 3:40]

Sliczny ten motylek na trawce. Wyglada jakby mial zaraz spasc.

Hi Joanna
Excellent composition, very nice DOF
In a friendly way Christophe

Lovely light Joanna. The BG is nicely blurred and the backlight well managed. The focus is bit soft though.

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  • ewa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-09 6:57]

Kolejne cudowne ujecie slonecznego, kolorowego motylka. Podoba sie.

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