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Dawn over Swansea Bay.


Dawn over Swansea Bay.
Photo Information
Copyright: Sian Sullivan (Sullypics) (12)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-12-04
Categories: Seascape
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-04-03 5:24
Viewed: 2907
Points: 6
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  • anel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 3053 W: 3 N: 8715] (40574)
  • [2010-04-04 4:17]
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Hello Sian,
At first welcome on TN! A very fine and peaceful picture, very discreet on the thumbnail, but very interesting if looking closer. I especially like the layers of subtle colors and the way you composed your picture.
May be some PP-work would have given a little motre visual impact in giving for example more contrast.
For me natural pictures are always welcome.
Hapy Easter
Kind regards
Anne

Hello Sian.nice shot,welcome to the sight.keep up the good work.check out trekearth aswell.
Dai..

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 26 N: 3879] (13882)
  • [2010-04-09 5:42]

Hi Sian,

It's a lovely ambience you captured here, the light in the clouds and the soft peach tones are really nice. Composition is good, with the rule of thirds applied well.
The only thing i might suggest would be using a tripod and a ND graduated filter. These would allow a lighter foreground and a greater DOF by using a smaller aperture, say f/16 or the like. Maybe even something lying around on the beach or some sort of feature in the foreground would be a nice additional interest. Anyway, they're just a few suggestions, it's still a lovely shot!
tfs
Paul

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