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Copyright: Michael Baker (strider) (4)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-17
Categories: Insects
Camera: sony A100, Minolta 50mm 1.7
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-04-29 0:23
Viewed: 4446
Points: 2
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Bee and bug competting for nectar on a palm flower in Samoa
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To jlinaresp: bee picstrider 1 05-08 20:26
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Hi Michael,
I like what you have done in this photo, the colors are superb, good light and a very well chosen POV.
Only two things to correct:
1) Need a more rectangular cut to improve the composition and generate more visual impact.
2) Increase sharp in the backe and eyes of the bee, it was poor in shot.
I did a WS, I hope you find it useful. Thanks for sharing. Greetings.
Jesús

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