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Dancer
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Copyright: Joanna Wieczorek (cafecrem) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1201 W: 60 N: 1392] (9248)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06
Camera: Olympus 765UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Butterflies, 50-60 points chapter 3, 40-49 Points (Chapter 5) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-08-03 3:32
Viewed: 3438
Points: 63
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For Sylvia!
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  • Great 
  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-08-03 4:13]

I bet, Sylvia will be glad ;-) Fragile, detailed, with fantastic patterns on wings. Diagonal composition with blurred BG works very well. Another very nice summer picture!

  • Great 
  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2005-08-03 4:16]

Lovely butterfly, Joanna. Very sharp details, great light and composition. Well done and TFS. : )

  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-08-03 4:27]

Hello Joanna!
Very nice butterfly capture.Cross framing,simple and blurred BG and composition are excellent.TFS...:-)

Hello Joanna,
Nice gift ...
TFS it !
Laurent

A beauty Joanna.
Well composed, lovely colours and well composed.
Very well done.

Hi Joanna
Great composition and colors and excellent BG
TFS
In a friendly way Christophe

Hello Joanna!
Very nice capture.
Good DOF and POV,
Clear details,
Good BG and
Perfect composition.Thanks for sharing.

Joanna this is beautiful, the soft colors and the sharp detail are amazing. I love the diagonal tilt to the blade of grass, and the frame is very complimentary also. The little bit of sky in the background is nice as well. Super photo, a masterpiece! Well done.

  • Great 
  • halki Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 242 W: 9 N: 105] (471)
  • [2005-08-03 5:45]

Hello Joanna!
Wonderful butterfly,sharp,well detailed and composed.
Thanks for posting.

  • Great 
  • olar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-03 6:07]

Ale piekny motyl. Na tej trawce wyglada rewelacyjnie.

  • Great 
  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2005-08-03 6:28]

Hi Joanna, this is beautiful, such a pretty butterfly. Its wings look quite hairy but you show ir very clearly. I like its grey legs and the diagonal lines. Well done.

Hello Joanna

Another wonderful macro from you. The subtle colours are lovely to view. Excellent OOF BG. The only nit, and it is very minor, I would crop the top to remove the white. It is a distraction. As I said minor!! Lovely work. Thanks.

Hey Joanna,

Another excellent capture from you. Well done. I love your DOF on this. It gives the image so much emphasis.

Hi Joanne,
Beautiful capture and well done on this composition. Excellent work.

Mike

  • Great 
  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 751 W: 31 N: 20] (5100)
  • [2005-08-03 10:30]

Witaj Joanno,
bardzo ładny motyl fajnie pokazany. Gratulacje i pozdr.
Aleksander

Beautiful shot Joanna! Well composed with great colors and light. The OOF BG isolates the subject well, Great job!

  • Great 
  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-08-03 13:44]

Joanna, maybe I'm mistaken, but I have the feeling the shot is a little bit out of focus.

Despite that, great composition, colors and pov.

The butterfly is very beautiful; besides, the diagonal leaf adds a lot to the picture.

Hello Joanna,
wonderful picture, POV is great,sharpness and details too. Well done.

  • Great 
  • Kaszek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 50 N: 391] (1451)
  • [2005-08-03 15:56]

Masz wyjatkowe szczescie do motyli. Co jeden to ladniejszy :)

Lovely shot Joanna, beautiful butterfly with showy colours. Composition is good and POV which shows a little sky is v good. 6/10 Well done.

Nice shot Joanna,
Good sharp detail and good POV. Nicely exposed and good colours. Good composition.
Well captured, thanks for posting.

  • Great 
  • AndyB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 32 N: 1351] (3982)
  • [2005-08-03 19:06]

Hello Joanna,
Its a very nice capture.
You are doing well getting the butterflies this year,they are quite scarce here as the weather hasn't been too good.
The composition is excellent,the colours contrast nicely and the background is great.
A good shot,well done.

TFS

  • Great 
  • CTP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 6 N: 946] (2726)
  • [2005-08-04 0:10]

Excellent photo Joanna.
Sharpness,colors,dof,pov and focus very good.
CT

Hello Joanna,
Very nice shot! The composition is well seen, even if personally I cut the top of the photograph to eliminate the white sky. The colours and contrast are excellent.
TFS, cordially,
Jean-Patrick

  • Great 
  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2005-08-04 3:36]

What a superb butterfly that you have well captured ! Composition, colors, details and sharpness are very good ! Thanks for sharing Joanna.

very nice one Joanna,
it's almost perfect, the only thing is that he turning is head away and that's a shame, farther it is great, very good job,
gr. Jaap

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  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1237 W: 130 N: 882] (2821)
  • [2005-08-05 16:51]

Simply beautufl photo!
It's a Lycaenidae.
It's a Lycaena dispar (Haworth, 1803).
Know as Large Copper in english.
Doesn't exist in Portugal.

  • Great 
  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2005-08-06 7:25]

Hi Joanna!
Personal assessment of the photo: excellent. You have a wonderfull collection of butterflies.
Strong visual impact.
Aptness of the photo for the site: excellent.
Personal assessment of the note: n/a.
TFS.
Have a good weekend!

Hello Joanna,

Wonderful colors and I liked the contrast with BG.

TFS,

A super composition, although I think I would have cropped the horizon out of the top of the frame.
Over all, though, a very striking and simple photo.

  • Great 
  • ewa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-17 4:25]

Kolejny cudowny letni motyl z kolorami lak.
Bardzo ladnie ci wychodza te piekne owady.

  • Great 
  • optic Gold Star Critiquer [C: 322 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-01 21:16]

Bonjour Joanna,
Qu'il est joli ce petit papillon, j'aime beaucoup votre travail. La composition est magnifique ainsi que les couleurs et la lumičre.

Merci du partage,
Christian

Nice butterfly, so close, the fuzz shows! So nice!

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