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Hummingbird Delight


Hummingbird Delight
Photo Information
Copyright: Daisy Clymer (daisytx) (16)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-17
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel, Canon 100-300mm, SanDisk CF 1GB
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Hummingbirds - Colibris - Oiseaux-mouches [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-10-19 11:31
Viewed: 4182
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo was taken at the Birding Center in Port Aransas, we have had a couple of cold fronts come through, so I was glad to get this shot as they are on their way farther south.
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Bienvenida a TN Daisy.
Hermosa primera presentacion con muy bellos colores y la maravillosa pequeña presencia del colibrí en vuelo.
Excelente agudeza con buena perspectiva.
Personalmente hubiera elegido un encuadre algo menor.
Recuerda incluir los valores de exposicion al ingresar los datos de la imagen.
Realicé un workshop, con un encuadre distinto.. espero te agrade.

Welcome to TN Daisy.
Beautiful first presentation with very pretty colors and wonderful presence of the small the humming bird in flight.
Excellent sharpness with good perspective.
Personally it had chosen a somewhat smaller frame.
Remember to include the values of exposure when entering the data of the image.
I made a Workshop, with a different frame...I hope pleases to you.

tres belle composition, l'intensité des couleurs est tres bonne, le flou des ailes de l'oiseau renforce vraiment le mouvement de l'oiseau, le tout est vraiment bien cadré.
nice done.

Welcome Daisy, This is a grand composition. The colours and details are very nice. I do think Ricardo has a point with a smaller crop. Some more info in your note would be usefull, have a look at some notes others post. You'll get the idea. Thanx for sharing.

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  • Lesley Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 13 N: 913] (2988)
  • [2004-10-19 15:12]

This has the potential to be a fine image, but the first thing I see wrong with it is the hummer is placed directly in the middle of the photo. I would like to see it off center as this is more important to me than cropping it in closer. Closer would be nice, but not essential in my book. The lighting is even, but I would bump up the levels or curves to brighten it up a little. The colors in this image are superb abd your focus nailed the hummer perfectly. If I was to crop it I would probably still keep it in landscape orientation and not change it to portrait.

Now after all that...welcome to TN, Daisy. This is a fine first image to introduce yourself and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Beautiful first shot. I like better with Ricardo´s WS but if I has the full res one to see in big format, yours would be lovely. Welcome, hope to see more photos and critiques soon.

Hello Daisy and welcome on TN.

Very nice first post and sure you were very lucky to get this capture - it is not an esy one to take. The colours are very nice as well as the dof but I have to agree with Lesley about the composition. It would be nice to have the hummingbird out of the centre. Therefore I dared to make a WS to show you what I mean - hope it is OK.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-10-20 5:25]

You know how to make an entrance! Welcome to TN. You start off with a eal beuty. The sharpness and color is great.

Thanks for posting and I hope to see lots more of your work

Japie

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