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Simply Line

Simply Line
Photo Information
Copyright: Barry Kusuma (barry) (373)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-29
Categories: Savannah
Exposure: f/8.5, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Natural stripes [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-12-02 12:31
Viewed: 4417
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this photograph was taken at Bromo Mountain Indonesia
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Very sugestive patterns, snakes of traces of wind in the sand. You bring parts of Indonesia that are not what comes to the mind of one that knows the country trough books, photos and movies. All we know are the busy streets of Jakarta, the thick and dangerous jungles of Borneo and the heavenly temples of Bali...

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  • Gudule Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 248 W: 11 N: 288] (1204)
  • [2005-12-02 20:55]

First time of my life I see such a photo from Indonesia.
Its is very different of the buildings of big cities.
Thank you Barry.
Good DOF and composition and presentation.


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  • cedryk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 967 W: 50 N: 1722] (5270)
  • [2005-12-02 21:12]

Hello Barry,
Great shot based just on pattern composition and colour constrast. Almost a graphic art :-)
Best greetings,

Barry Thank you for posting this most excellent natural pattern picture is is very well seen and captured, and for me the thick black frame on this occasion helps strengthen the image qualities.
I would of liked the notes to tell us a little more about the area in which this was shot. if it had been posted to TL it would of stood alone purely as a pattern image, but here on TN a little bit of information about the site being viewed and how it was taken are thought to be useful.
TFS this most intresting image yours Robert

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  • Bac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 93 W: 3 N: 33] (486)
  • [2005-12-03 7:22]

So simple and so beautiful, nothing to add it's great. TFS.

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  • ridfa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 89 W: 0 N: 376] (4111)
  • [2005-12-05 6:02]

Quel dessin. Superbe rendu. Une photo panoramique aurait sans doute accentué l'effet des lignes. La règle des tiers s'impose, me semble t'il.


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