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Pitangus sulphuratus 2...
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Copyright: Jose Reynaldo da Fonseca (nofer) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1190 W: 366 N: 811] (2307)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-04
Categories: Birds
Camera: Sony DSC-F828, Carl Zeiss - 28 - 200mm f2-2,2, Memory Stick PRO 4GB, Kenko UV 58mm
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Natureza em Avare - Fauna e Flora, Birds of Brazil, Birds of the World, Birds in Brazil 2, BIRDS OF AMERICA [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-12-05 22:45
Viewed: 11515
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
I will put this photo in Workshop of the foto
(shot in the day 27-nov) but there the ones that already made critic in the other picture would not return!!!
With certainty this picture (04-dez) it is better...!!! I Used flash.
Your opinion is important. Thank you!

Details of the race see in the NOTES of the other photo! (TKS)
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http://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bem-te-vi

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  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-12-06 2:08]
  • [+]

Hello Jose!
Very nice capture.I liked lighting,framing,colors and pose of bird a lot.TFS...:-)

Very nice composition and a great point of view. The exposure on the stomach seems to have overexposed the feathers there. In a workshop I tried to fix some of the damage. Very good image nevertheless!

Hi Jose,
A beautiful little bird. The colors look excellent. Honestly it looks just alittle soft. Meaning the focus was slightly off, not giving as sharp of detail as it should have for being this close. The composition and framing look great!
Scott

Soooo pretty colours,
hi Jose, I like your bird very much.
He's also looking so interested and you captured him very near and sharp, wonderful, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hi Jose

Pretty bird. Looks a little over exposed in areas and the focus is soft, but nicely composed and presented. Thanks.

  • Good 
  • neia Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 188 W: 34 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-06 22:58]

Esta foto está bem melhor, pelo menos mais nítida, do que a outra. Excelentes cores, o fundo ficou ótimo, a composição também, o "seu" bem-te-vi é bem simpático.

Bela foto Reynaldo!!
As cores estão ótimas, me parece que faltou um pouco o foco na cabeça, mas nada que desmereça a foto!!

Parbéns

Francisco Sales

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-12-09 13:36]

José Reynaldo, tenho a sensação de que a foto poderia estar um pouquinho mais nítida. Talvez, um "tapinha" no Photoshop pudesse melhorar um pouco a image.

De qualquer modo, como disse a Neia, "seu" bem-te-vi é de fato bacana.

Gosto das cores e do ângulo, bem como do fundo.

Nice shot Jose. You have a great POV and pose.
Good detail and colors also. I did a workshop to try & improve your shot. After looking at your own WS with your burn tool, I think I like yours better!

  • Great 
  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2006-02-18 8:25]
  • [2]

A beautiful pose.. very streamline ;-). This bird has beautiful colors and you captured them so well. Excellent sharp details, very nice POV.
Sky

  • Great 
  • osse Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 955 W: 0 N: 89] (7805)
  • [2006-04-12 15:13]
  • [2]

Hi Jose!
Beautiful little bird.
Great colours,details, sharpnes,POV and DOF.
Well done

osse

olá,
as cores são muito bonitas, bonita perspectiva! Gostei da luz e nitidez! Fica bem Ana:)

Excelente defenição nesta belíssima fotografia!!! Parabéns.
Cumprimentos. J. Edgar

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