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Duck
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Copyright: Agnieszka TW (agea0) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 0] (86)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-23
Categories: Birds
Camera: Kodak EasyShare Z740
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-31 10:05
Viewed: 4349
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
Duck - Park Szczesliwicki in Warsaw
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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 242 W: 7 N: 458] (2663)
  • [2006-01-31 10:14]

Firstly, welcome to the site. Crit: I think a portrait rather than landscape crop would have been better as it would also have given the duck some room to "walk" into. It would also have eliminated the leaf behind it as well as the top section of ripples in the water. Lok forward to more posts from you. I will try to get time to do a small ws for you soon. Cheers. Tim

Hi Agnieszka,
It's a nice picture you begin with.
Maybe a little more space to the left.
Nice colours and good details.
Well done.

Welcome to TN.

  • Great 
  • damien (88)
  • [2006-01-31 15:25]

Hi Agnieszka and welcome on TE.

I like the attitude of the duck, but I think he's too centered. Maybe you should have let more space on the left of the picture. Hope we'll seen another pictures soon !

cheers !

Damien

High on the cute factor. Nice shot, good composition.

You could try to use a flash or light to get a catch-light in the ducks eye. With animals the eyes are trully important and we need to do what we can to bring them out.

TFS

witaj Aguska... bardzo ladnie komponujesz.. i te nasycenie barw nono:) podoba sie jedym slowem..pozdrawiam:) hey

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2006-02-01 10:28]

Agnieszka, you a great beginning.

The guys above have already suggested a different composition.

Apart from that, great colors and pov.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2006-02-02 2:41]

A very good first post, Agnieszka.
Nice composition and point of view.

I wish you the most cordial welcome on TrekNature.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing.

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  • RII Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 481 W: 0 N: 895] (2862)
  • [2006-02-02 2:59]

Hi Pretty Agnieszka.
Happy shot,good colors contrast and details, happy composition, very nice photo.
Saludos...RICARDO.

PD. WELCOME TO TREKNATURE

Uwielbiam kaczki:)
Na szczęśliwicach nie bylem jeszcze "Na kaczkach"...choc wydaje mi sie ze na dolince sluzewieckiej sa najlepsze:):):)

Fajne ujecie choc chyba troszke focus sie pogubil..:):)

Pozdrawiam:)

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  • Recato (139)
  • [2006-02-17 15:00]

Nice pic. Looks like one of my ducks floating around here somewhere.

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