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Ocean/Pacific 2006

Ocean/Pacific 2006
Photo Information
Copyright: Chuck Kuhn (ckuh55) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 40 W: 13 N: 26] (628)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-18
Categories: Ocean
Exposure: f/11, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-08 5:57
Viewed: 3872
Points: 4
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Venice Beach/Pacific Ocean, Winter 2006
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To SunToucher: Thanks for adviseckuh55 1 03-11 09:30
To Evelynn: thanks for commentsckuh55 1 03-11 09:28
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Hi Chuck,
Beautiful colors and composition with the two boats. The light you've captured is amazing. I do feel that you have used a little too much saturation on the ocean. The waves seem to become unreal. Further, I noticed that you have dirt spots in the top of your photo, This can easely be cloned out, and a lens cleaning cloth will help. And last, your horizon isn't straight.

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2006-03-08 8:16]

Hi Chuck,
a beautiful seascape with the sky as the main interest. Nice division of the canvas, the boats add a nice interest and a good depth to the picture. I also noticed the spots that Sun pointed out, but as he mentioned they can easyly be removed.

Nice composition and beautiful sky. I agree withthe above critiques. Next time try selecting the water/ boats and enhance that part of the photo separately from the sky. It is difficult in landscape/seacape photography to get all parts of the scene exposed correctly.

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