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I am sad all alone

I am sad all alone
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Copyright: EDITH SEGUIN (nainnain) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 83 N: 1282] (6259)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-07
Categories: Birds
Camera: konica mimolta dimage z6, 52mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-08 2:50
Viewed: 3831
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
has all for my first of 2007, I know that it is not formidable and has noise, but this poor small sparrow finally seemed sad, taken through the window, which is not always easy in adjustment, (for me)!!! it waited patiently until the titmouses leaves him a small moment to go also to take a small seed to him to be restored. then why to forget it, it deserves to be shown like the others, NOT???? here, thank you for your comments greetings.

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Hello Edith,
A cute little fellow well captured!
Nice details are captured and he gives a good pose...
This is a good reminder it is feeding season in Northern locations!
Pablo -

Hello Edith,
This sparrow looks like one here in Thailand. Nice shot and well seen. Great exposure and composition. TFS.

Hello Edith,
Nice shot! The sparrow is catched in interesting pose. I like the POV and lighting as well. The only thing I'm not sure about is the colour of the frame. I think a neautral one would emphasize the picture better.
Overall, good job on this one!

bonjour edith

bien sur qu'il mérite d'être montré moi je l'aime bein ce moineau bravo


Belle photo,je regarde les w. mais je t' ai expliqué le pourquoi du comment,je ne dois pas l' expliquer a tous le monde. bel oiseau,les moineaux sont souvent oubliés et toi tu y a pensé,cela est très bien pour eux. Amitiés Thomas

Hello edith,

Excllent work, great colors bg POV DOF perfect details very crisp, nicly composed and capture photo, excllent Job

TFS Kyle

Allo Édith,
Belle capture sympatique de ce moineau femelle. Nous en avons plein ici aussi. J'aime bien les couleurs mais comme tu dis, ce n'est pas une photo "parfaite" mais qui vaut la peine d'être publiée toutefois. Merci,

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2007-01-08 10:05]

Hello Edith,
shooting through a window is always difficult.
I like you little frind, you captured him well. Nice details and the pose is very nice. I like the framing it goes well with your composition.

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  • mikou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 869 W: 68 N: 1479] (6093)
  • [2007-01-08 10:16]

Hi Edith.
Lovely catch.I in our country in nature yet our sparrow haven't seen several years,he disappeared.Only possibility how I see sparrow is here on NT.
You be him captured in nice position.Nice composition and colours.Good note too.
Nice done.TFS
Greetings Milos

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2007-01-08 10:32]

Hi Edith.
Very touching note and cute shot. Your own opinion is quite critical, therefore I only shall note, that it is pleasant to me. Very nice composition and presentation of the shot, delicate, pleasant to eye colour palette, impressive POV and excellent DOF. TFS and best wishes.

bonjour edith
tu as raison elle n'est pas parfaite,mais c'est vrai que la vitre est un gros handicap.
un conseil pour qu'il puisse avoir aussi a manger,tu lui laisse des miettes sur le sol comme cela pas de conflit entre espece!

Your image does accentuate the sense of loneliness of this poor little sparrow, Edith.
It is a fairly good image with a fine profile view of the bird.
TFS and take care.

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  • wuta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 855 W: 2 N: 617] (2142)
  • [2007-01-08 14:34]

hello Edith , A Great shot from the lovely bird , good colours pose details ,and si looks to you , the framing is very good , Greetings Teunie .

Bonjour Edith,
Very aesthetic image, beautiful colors, well composed and nicely framed.
Great shot and great PP works.

Ben Lakitan

Cute shot of the sparrow Edith nice pose and colours composition looks fine rgds Necip.

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1515 W: 18 N: 3165] (11638)
  • [2007-01-08 16:06]

Sad and all alone but very cute. Nice details, good pose and lovely POV



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  • Isu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 313 W: 0 N: 21] (1663)
  • [2007-01-08 16:59]

Hola Nain:
Bonita toma, me gusta el fondo, el encuadre y la presentación. Saludos Sira

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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1175 W: 8 N: 4240] (15809)
  • [2007-01-08 17:40]

Hola Edith.- Una bella foto, agradable a la vista con colores muy naturales y pose muy natural. Luis52.

Bonjour Edith!
Ce n'est pas ta meilleure, mais les condition à travers la fenêtre ne sont pas idéales non plus.
Je la trouve cependant très sympa, et elle cadre très bien avec l'ensemble des belles captures d'oiseaux de ta galerie, notamment au niveau de l'expression!

hi edith,
nice capture,
well composed shot,
nice pov, good dof,
well saturated colours,
tfs & regards

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  • fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 5 N: 3475] (15161)
  • [2007-01-09 4:22]

Hello Edith,
Very nice shot.
Lovely detail and colours,nice composition.
very well done.

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  • loot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5524 W: 722 N: 4163] (11276)
  • [2007-01-09 8:08]

Hi Edith

A sombre moment for the birdie turned out a lovely photo opportunity for you to enjoy.

A nicely proportionate composition leaving the sparrow with enough space to view and move into. The colours are very natural, the BG is well OOF and complimentary to the bird, and the exposure was well managed. I just wonder how it would have looked if you turned the 2 colours of the frame around, with other words used the green to fill the broad area (maybe even a darker tone of the same green) and the golden-brown for the thin line. I am of the opinion that it would have enhanced your posting even more.

Good work and TFS.

coucou didith
il est tout mignon, même derrière ta vitre, je trouve que ce n'est passi mal
gros bisous

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer [C: 191 W: 0 N: 10] (173)
  • [2007-01-09 11:58]

merhaba EDITH SEGUIN ;
good photo bravo tebrikler selamlar

Bonjour Edith,
A good reward for your patience in this shot!
You got a very good picture of this sparrow, colors, and details.
I like also the composition, with the line of the brick.
The frame used gets the best of the photo.
Congratulations and thanks for share,

a charming little fellow..girl?...
birds are fascinating and quite full of charachter..and each one is different
how can we tell?

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