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I am proud I rectify myself

I am proud I rectify myself
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Copyright: EDITH SEGUIN (nainnain) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 83 N: 1282] (6259)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-20
Categories: Birds
Camera: konica mimolta dimage z6, 52mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-01-27 18:03
Viewed: 3520
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
good evening has all after one week of breakdown of connection has Internet, me revoilà and still this evening with a small blue tit to change a little!!!! as I say it in the title, it appears very proud and is drawn up well. I like much this photo bus I find that one sees the various colors very well, although it is lost quality, because as much of my photographs of titmouses it was taken through the window in double glazing. I hope that you will like it despite everything. well on I await your comments good Sunday has all.

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Excelent colour presettaion Edith. Interesting motive . Very well done. TFSD. Stev

Salut Édith
Bonne photo, les couleurs et la prise de vue sont parfaites. Félicitations et bonne fin de semaine.

Merci et au revoir...JP

hi edith,
nice capture,
i liked the tight composition here,
well saturated colours,
tfs & regards

Hi Edith,
Lovely capture.
The colors and blurry BG are great.
Although the cropping is somehow too much.

The upright position of the bird is endearing, Edith. The curiosity on the face is unmistakable.
Well done and TFS.

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  • Alex99 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
  • [2007-01-28 4:55]

Hi Edith.
Charming tit and sweet its picture. I like your hold and impressive cropping, beautiful colourful image of the bird and BG, excellent details. Bravo. Very expressive and pleasant to eyes picture. TFS and best regards.

Ciao Edith, lovely bird with wonderful colors, great details, very well done, have a nice sunday, ciao Silvio

Hello Edith,
Welcome back from your short time absence!
And you do it well with this fine blue tit...
I like the tight framing, as always the details are good...
Well composed presentation of this fine little fellow, great clarity in colours!
Pablo -

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2007-01-28 6:17]

Helo Edith,
Nice shot of this stroppy little bird! I like the pose and the composition very much. A bit soft but the colours are nice too.
TFS and regards, Ulla

bonjour Edith,

très belle photo et joli cadrage belle couleurs et bonne netteté j'aime bien l'attidude de l'oiseau bravo


Salut Édith,
Hey bien, bon retour! C'est vraiment une prise de très près et c'est superbe. Il manque un peu de netteté sur sa tête mais j'aime bien ce care serré et la pose de l'oiseau. Les couleurs sont très belles aussi. Je trouve que c'est très bien fait considérant que ça a été pris à travers une fenêtre, ne la vois pas :) Bravo!

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2007-01-28 7:19]

Hello Edith,
Lovely capture.I liked details on feathers,colors,POV,pose of bird and composition a lot.Excellent work!

Hi Edith,

Very nice shot, I like the pose, he does look very proud like this. Good composition and very colourful.
It's beautiful, well done :-)

Greetings, Nel

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  • ddg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 867 W: 24 N: 1008] (5507)
  • [2007-01-28 11:39]

Bonjour Edith, l'attitude de l'oiseau est belle ainsi que les couleurs, mais je trouve que le piqué est un peu juste, cela doit tenir au fait que la vitre est interposée!! Cadrage un peu serré pour moi!! je suis difficile!! bonne fin de dimanche et aussi bonne année 2007 avec un peu de retard, Didier.

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  • wuta Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 855 W: 2 N: 617] (2142)
  • [2007-01-28 14:22]

Hello Edith , A beautifull shot from this bird , good pose colours very nice bg , Greetings Teunie .

Belle photo,cette mésange comme les autre est très jolie,même si elle a été prise au travers d' un double vitrage. Amitiés Thomas

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  • horia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2158 W: 224 N: 4749] (16656)
  • [2007-01-29 4:08]

Hi Edith

Taking into consideration that it's shot through a double-glazing window, this is a very beautiful shot.

The colors really came out wonderfully and the loss of sharpness is therefore explained. Besides there facts, i really like the POV and the charming pose of the litle bird.
However, i think that the crop is a bit too tight and maybe the composition would be enhanced by a bit more room in the upper-right side.

Anyway, bravo and TFS

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2007-01-29 9:21]

Bonita captura Edith por la belleza del ave bien retratada en cuanto el punto de vista con intensos colores gracias a una apropiada iluminación.
La agudeza es buena, pero creo que el foco no está ubicado sobre la cabeza del ave, siempre necesaria por una buena composición... allí aparecer algo soft.
El encuadre vertical es adecuado pero demasiado ajustado... a pesar que me agradan ese tipo de encuadres, creo que en aves como aquí deben ser más espaciosos para beneficiar la estética de la presentación.
Mis mejores saludos... Ricardo

Nice capture Edith for the beauty of the well depicted bird as soon as the point of view with intense colors due to an appropriate illumination.
The sharpness is good, but I believe that the focus is not located on the head of the bird, always necessary for a good composition... there to appear something soft.
The vertical framing is appropriate but too tihght... in spite that I like that type of framing, I believe that in birds like here they should be more roomy to benefit the aesthetics of the presentation.
My best regards... Ricardo

bonjour edith
personellement je trouve que tu aurais dû laisser de l'espace devant sa tête,et il faudrait que tu tente d'utiliser un logiciel de retouche pour le bruit.sinon jolies couleurs.

coucou ma didith
tes oiseaux sont toujours aussi poseurs...
mais que mets tu dans les boules????
bravo pour cette photo, ton cadrage serré est très bon

Bonjour Edith,
I like a lot you portrait of this blue tit!
It is so colorful, their plumage is really magnificent.
DOF used gives you a soft and perfect background.
You managed so good to get this shot thru the double glass window.
Felicitacions et merci du partager,

Bonjour Edith,
Sharp and nice details.
Interesting vertical composition.
Very nice shot.

Ben Lakitan

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  • mikou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 869 W: 68 N: 1479] (6093)
  • [2007-01-30 7:08]

Hi Edith.
I really like pose of this your titmouse.As well as amazing colours.I respect for this your shot,you taken be him over glazing.I am also taken several shots birds on ours garden over glazing,but was it much bad.
I like nice composition with perfect POV.
Well done,TFS.
Best greetings Milos

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 998 W: 65 N: 1270] (5199)
  • [2007-01-30 9:32]

Hello Edith
What a wonderful bird and beautiful picture! It has marvellous colors and a nice composition, though maybe you cropped it a little too much above (just my opinion). Really beautiful still.
Best wishes

Bonsoir Edith,
Jolie photo de ce petit et coloré oiseau , a une pose bien "étirée". Est découpée la photo ?

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  • jojo Gold Star Critiquer [C: 168 W: 0 N: 8] (176)
  • [2007-02-04 15:58]

re coucou
J 'avais pas vu ceet belle photo
beaux détails et belles couleurs Edith
bonne semaine mon amie


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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2007-02-07 7:52]

Hello Edith,
this close up is very good, sharp details and lovely colors. POV is very good and the OOF BG is very well done. I would love to have seen a bit more space around the bird.

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