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Hi- first atempt


Hi- first atempt
Photo Information
Copyright: Kiril Todorov (Phoki) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 21] (284)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-22
Categories: Insects
Exposure: f/5.1, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-22 9:33
Viewed: 3321
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Spring is here!
I dont know what it is!
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To PDP: Honey BeePhoki 1 04-12 02:26
To livios: HiPhoki 1 03-31 02:17
To Esox: ThanksPhoki 1 03-25 03:38
To red45: Thanks!!Phoki 1 03-23 07:30
To LordPotty: honey beePhoki 1 03-23 02:43
To pgmoni: Honey beePhoki 1 03-23 02:39
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Very good macro. Sharp and with a good light; This is a honey bee, I believe. Some notes about where exactly you found it (the type of environment) would be very helpful if you wish to receive suggestions about ID.
Welcome to TN and show us more of your work.

Hi Kiril,
Yes this is a honeybee. Some of the details here are very clear.If you get down to the level of your subject,shoot from the side and perhaps a little from the front it makes for a much more interesting POV (point of view). It also shows more details of the insects shape.
If you have any idea of what your subject is,you can do a google search or look it up in a book,so that you can write a little about it. Notes about your subject are encouraged and always appreciated. Good first effot.Thanks for posting.

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-03-23 5:22]
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Hi Kiril!
Looks like this is a kind of bee. Good first attempt. Focus is set on its wings and body background is slightly out of focus. I like warm colours and light.
Welcome on TN!

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  • Esox Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 20 N: 344] (972)
  • [2005-03-24 13:38]
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Welcome on TN!
Great first post with this honey bee (Apis mellifera).
Very good sharpness.
I agree with Steve, a next time, try to shoot its side, it's another interesting POV.
Waiting for your next!

Hi, Kiril. Welcome aboard.

Very nice first post. It makes me think that nice posts will come from you.

As for the picture, I like pov and the dof.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-04-05 16:23]
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Hi Kiril, nice Honey Bee, good shot with lots of details and a nice composition. Well done.

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