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What r u thinking of ?


What r u thinking of ?
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Copyright: Ari Widodo (ariw) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 29 W: 8 N: 25] (179)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-03
Categories: Mammals
Camera: Olympus E500, ZUIKO DIGITAL 40-150mm 1:3.5-4.5, Hoya UV - 58mm
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-12-13 6:31
Viewed: 4759
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
From Ngarai Sianok series, a creature that lives there
What is he thinking of ?

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Hello Ari,
Candid shot.You might think of cropping the uppar part of picture.

regards
Mahesh

great composition, TFS Ori

This is a nice capture of this little fellow. I agree with Pankaj on the composition. I can see you liked the framing that the wire provided, but I think it lessens the impact of the subject. I think I would have cropped it a little higher and wider than Pankaj did. I really like the pattern of the three curved wires on the left. I do really like animal shots where the subject is not staring straight at the camera as here.

TFS
Evelynn : )

hi ari,
nice capture,
the title is very correct for the shot,
it really seems that he is in deep thought,
however composition is a bit loose for my taste,
i have posted a worshop and hope that you may like it.
keep shooting,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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