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Iris regis-uzziae


Iris regis-uzziae
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Copyright: Ori Fragman Sapir (fragman) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3032 W: 11 N: 2351] (43778)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-02-19
Categories: Flowers
Camera: Nikon D600, AF Micro Nikkor 60mm
Exposure: f/36.0, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-02-22 0:27
Viewed: 1722
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We were delighted to find this rare iris in S Jordan, in keap blooming at 1500m. It is an endemic species for S Israel and s Jordan.
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  • Ishi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 21 N: 1943] (13387)
  • [2014-02-22 1:01]
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Truly beautiful! I love those leaves!

Shabbat shalom,

Ishi

Hi Ori,

You added the background, didn't you?
- the reported shade on wall from the flash was not cropped out for the lower right leave.
- the image cutting is further OK but when pasting above the background the edges remain too sharp.
- The DOF is impossible: all in focus on the subject, while with the same blur for the background with no account of the distance.
- light direction on the subject and in the background doesn't fit.
- different ISO on the subject and on the background.
- normally for good composition you let see just a little bit of ground where the flower originates instead of cropping just above it. If opting to switch background you can't do that, and it results in a big minus for the composition.

Please do not take any offence for my critique. TN was meant for learning in first and for writing to each other usefull critiques. It's a pity in my opinion that most of users never do. I enjoy myself receiving usefull tips. I further enjoy your work. You do have a nice large set of brilliant pics posted on TN.

Best regards
Thanks for sharing
Jean-Marie.

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2014-02-22 11:07]

Hi Ori,very nice specie and very capture of this rare specie,i like it! Have a nice Sunday and thanks,Luciano

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